|Reviews for Kinship|
| Lord Gort chapter 1 . 10/26/2009
Interesting, although you are not the first to consider the possibility of Sam becoming a human Prime. Nonetheless, I am anxious to see where you take this. I commend you on a job well written and well done.
| Lunatic Pandora1 chapter 2 . 10/26/2009
Samuel Prime IS on-line. Weapons: Hot! Mission: The destruction of any and all Decepticon invaders.
| Marinelife37 chapter 2 . 10/26/2009
Great story. I can't wait to see what happens in the story. I think Sam took it rather well considering he is now related to Optimus Prime. Although I can't wait to see how it works. 'Bee only playing preachers' clips for talking was a nice touch.
| Soului chapter 2 . 10/25/2009
The premise behind this story is everything I could hope for in a post-ROTF fic. I can't wait to see where you take this.
| RK-Striker-JK-5 chapter 2 . 10/25/2009
Aww, that was awesome. :) I loved Optimus and Sam talking, there. Sam a Prime? Well, why not? ;) Bllod brothers sounds good to me.
This is a gentle, reflective piece. A good piece too. :) I wonder what happens next, lol.
| Luki Dimension chapter 2 . 10/25/2009
Luki likes this so much. I love Prime!Sam fics and love the blood brothers twist. Looking forward to what the future holds for both of them.
| Scarecrowqueen chapter 1 . 10/24/2009
*fwee* so exciting! can't wait to find out what all this means for Sam! eagerly awaiting update!
| Vaapad chapter 2 . 10/24/2009
Great story! I love it!
| Clifjumpersfangirl chapter 2 . 10/24/2009
wow that was really good the part with Optimus and sam at the end was really sweet I can't wait to read more :D
| samgirl19 chapter 2 . 10/24/2009
wow i found this story and wow this is good and i can't wait to read more
| Lotte-Bubbles chapter 2 . 10/24/2009
whoa... very good i like it:D i want more
| hummergrey chapter 2 . 10/24/2009
I wondered about any particles getting into Sam's hand. Never thought about the particles binding him closer to Optimus. Plot twist.
| The One Who Waits chapter 2 . 10/24/2009
This is a good follow up for Rotf. It's well written and i like where your going with the idea. I also like that your keeping with the canon. I hope you continue soon! :)
| Elariel chapter 2 . 10/24/2009
I am enjoying this new story. The prologue was entertaining for the sheer fact that Ratchet was referring to Sam whereas Will and Mikaela were discussing Optimus. Ending the prologue with the discovery that Ratchet was discussing the resident geek, i.e., Sam, was the icing on the cake.
As for the official first chapter, I enjoy your description of Sam's thoughts. His rationalizations are believable and you've really managed to show his growth from the recent events. He is desperately trying to assimlate all this new information and slowly he is coming to terms with his newfound status, but what does the future hold for him. I get the feeling that you will be throwing further curveballs at him and I hope that Sam is ready to bat with lady luck at his side and a healthy dose of sanity. He likely will need it.
Thank you also for looking at Sam's friendship with Optimus in such a different light. I look forward to reading your futurther ideas on the spark changes between them and about the alloy in Sam's blood.
Excellent start and great description. I look forward to reading more.
Thank you for sharing.
| VisualIDentificationZeta chapter 2 . 10/24/2009
I must say, this is one of the better ROTF-follow-ups I've read and the cherry on top is that it has canon pairings and not made up ones (meaning Sam and Mikeala are together). I definitely like the idea of Sam being a Prime and having the alloys in his blood (when is he getting an alt-form? hehe) and that he's a blood brother with Optimus.
Though one small detail: how can an air craft carrier smell of diesel? ACs are powered by nuclear reactors, not diesel engines, nor are air planes nor helicopters run on diesel but on jet fuel.
Please continue this fic very soon.