Reviews for BeachHead on the Battlefield
Rutga chapter 2 . 11/24/2009
I think you can attribute the lack of reviews to the lack of canon support for the pairing. For some reason BH/CG are popular pairing on this site, but they weren't a couple in the show or original comic. I can't recall a single time they even appeared together, let alone shared anything close to a romantic moment. If you're going to go without something out of left field, you can't expect too much reaction to it.

A small suggestion their names are separate. It's Cover Girl, not CoverGirl and Beach Head, not BeachHead.
general zargon chapter 5 . 11/7/2009
No, listen to Lil' Beachie! Add another chapter! Besides, I noticed that the status of the story isn't 'complete' so please update soon! Please keep up the great work!
Frankizzle chapter 5 . 11/6/2009
I think you should do a new story about the relationship between BeachHead and Cover Girl, when you have time or you feel like it, obviously (please please please!). You write them so incredibly well!

I still don't want it to be over!
Comix28 chapter 5 . 11/6/2009
Aww. I don't blame lil Beachie for shouting for more! (He really is an adorable figure, haha) This was a great ficlet. It really was. Too bad more people haven't appreciated it.

I know it must have been hard to arrange and organize a Joe battle in your mind, but as always, you did a GREAT job. Very detailed and easy flowing, easy to picture.

I can tell you really love BeachHead, because of all the insight into his character that you have. I could have sworn that this was a small segment from the cartoons. I loved it _
Faye Kinitt chapter 5 . 11/6/2009
lol beach head not only bully green shirts , but fan fiction writers aswell.

loved the ending , but i kinda feel bad for the male joes, the lady joes are very violent.
CrystalOfEllinon chapter 2 . 11/4/2009

He is the army of one!
TheDreamerLady chapter 4 . 10/30/2009
Beachhead. Ah, what a badass.

Enjoying the story, so keep it up!

Agent-M-0167 chapter 4 . 10/28/2009
Now that is the way that I see Beach Head! That was a great story.
Faye Kinitt chapter 4 . 10/28/2009
only started reading this today, great story. I got caught up with college stuff, stupid Performance appraisals getting in my way of fan fic .

i love beachhead and G. :reloaded did a great job with him ( it was a pretty good run, would have loved to see another story line)

I really like that Beach got a tank for Covergirl and Flint read my mind , knew she would love it! and loved Hawks , dont wanna know attitude to it all. he is very good at pretending he doesnt know whats going on with his troops.

cant wait to read more and im sure that there are loads of people reading this , every one loves breachhead ! but most poeple dont bothered to review or like me they got so caught up with your last fic that they were forced to get back to the real world for a bit and write up presentations on stupid stuff like performance appraisals . ok rant done now.
PhantomEmpress chapter 4 . 10/27/2009
Fabulous story. I love beach head, even though he gets a bad rap for being a hard ass.

Fun read, can't wait for more of your fics.
Frankizzle chapter 4 . 10/27/2009
Sorry I didn't review the other chapters, I was busy, we got lots of homework and there were a fair few parties (lame excuses, I know, but its the best I've got). I read it all in one go and it was AWESOME. Beach Head made me laugh so much (Flint got up and stood tiptoe to peer over the edge of their trench. Then he crouched back down. "I think he might be catching up to it. He's definitely still yelling at it.") XD

I loved the Beach Head/Cover Girl as well.
Psyk2 chapter 4 . 10/27/2009
Love it! Definitely keep Williams. He could 'barge in' on Beach and CG at a bad moment or something like that...
Karama9 chapter 3 . 10/26/2009
Hehe. Best gift ever. :)

But I wanted to see how BeachHead got that tank!
Psyk2 chapter 3 . 10/26/2009
ROTFL! Keep up the good work!
Karama9 chapter 2 . 10/25/2009
I really like the interaction between the two of them: it fits that BeachHead would stay professional (in a manner of speaking) and rough, instead of letting worries and emotions get the better of him right in the middle of a battle.

Don't worry about the smaller amount of reviews: you probably just lost the Snake Eyes effect is all.
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