I am definitely intrigued! Great chapter to begin the story... left us wondering lots of questions! Can't wait to find out why the cops took Edward, what did he do or what do they think he did? I like how this already feels different from TEF, definitely interested to see where it goes. :)

OH ANG dont be nervous love...This story will be epic. I loved the raw and uncut emotion that existed in this chapter. I could literally feel and see everything. Please update soon

Wow...you already have me crying. Great beginning. Hope you continue it.

wow that preface is amazingling written cant wait for more! im so intrigue of the story

woah... very intrigued...

Can I just say that you are one amazing and talented writer. I've read just about all of your stories, and have fallen in love with them all. Your story The Ex Factor was a piece of art, it was so beautifully written.

The Preface for this story blew me away, I'm already starting to tear up over it and it's only the first chapter. Also I love your idea of Edward and Bella being in the foster system, from exper I can't wait to see where you take this story and I know the journey will be amazing.

It seemed really really melodramatic. I half expected them to run into the ocean to commit suicide. You should let the work speak for itself instead of begging for reviews all the time.

You definitely got my attention. I cannot wait for more of this story.

My Darling Ang...what can I say except that I am in AWE of you for every word, every thought, every story that you write!

This first chapter-preface is AMAZING. My Gawd the goosebumps I have, the emotion I feel and "see". I can't wait to take this journey with you and this new story!

I LOVE YOU BB!

Aura

xox

Well I am definitely looking forward to see where you are taking this. I'm be along for the ride.

OMG I really used the tissue! what a way to made me feel angst and sad. I'm on with the story, I know after the ex factor that you are an amazing writer, so I will stick with you with this one. I am really intrigued of the situation, why were they apart, when and why they were together in the beginning, everything! Nice beginning

I am excited and intrigued with this chapter and what is to come!

You have hit the ground running with this one and it looks to be one hell of a ride. Heartfail on the first chapter. Wow!

Intense, gripping, raw, deep. You have evoked deep emotions of desperation, need, helplessness, fear, determination, exhaustion, anger, indignation, committment and what looks to be...love.

Amazing imagery and pace, Ang!

I truly look forward to this new journey with you.

xxoo