Reviews for Little Candles
Cb23bx chapter 4 . 10/28/2009
Great chapter! Your writing talent is incredible although i wish the chapters were a little longer but it dosent matter bc its still great keep it going
Kayka-chan chapter 3 . 10/27/2009
Quite wonderful! I cannot find any grammatical and/or spelling errors and the stories, while short, are still wonderfully written and flow beautifully. I cannot wait for the next chapter and you have my utmost encouragement. Till next time!

Rovardotter chapter 3 . 10/27/2009
You're right there are a lot of one-shots about this but yours is well written so I didn't really care about the other ;-)
xyzisme chapter 3 . 10/27/2009
Not very original, sorry! I guess it goes with the topic.
Rohain Tahquil chapter 1 . 10/27/2009
AW! thats beautiful. XD
Cb23bx chapter 3 . 10/26/2009
Wow this is a great story. your writing is absolutely incredible i actually felt like i was in the story. Please continue with this and if u need any help just tell me lol
Anonymous chapter 2 . 10/25/2009
Very good! I'd like to read more!
Rovardotter chapter 2 . 10/25/2009

I really liked this small chapter!

My favorite part of it (and I don't know why exactly) was, and I quote: "And the scar, an unsightly, revolting symbol of such an unparalleled beauty that lies beneath, represents everything that she loves him for. It is the scar that she has to thank for bringing him to her; if he never got the scar he would never have been banished, if he was never banished he never would have found her."

I just think it's beautiful :D
xyzisme chapter 1 . 10/25/2009
Very well written, although you might want to make the paragraphs shorter. What prompt is this?
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