Reviews for Little Candles
janedoe401 chapter 27 . 10/10/2010
Sokka has never felt such trembling adrenaline within him, but he must keep control of himself: His brotherly instincts are becoming lecherous instead of simply a protective defense mechanism.


Hnnnnn...and here I thought a few chappies back you said you weren't aiming for an incestual tone.

But truth be told, considering how close these siblings are and how overprotective Sokka is, it wouldn't be all that far fetched if there was some hint of it in there.
janedoe401 chapter 26 . 10/10/2010
Yes, absolutely. People seem to think that if one is Zutarian we automatically dislike Ang. I like Ang. Truly I do. And I love the fact that he IS child like and innocent and sometimes a bit too self-righteous and naive. But it also means that because of those qualities I like about him, he just doesn't deserve Katara and he can't make her happy even if he is suppose to be the Hero.
janedoe401 chapter 25 . 10/10/2010
Totally agree 100% with the Author's note. More than well expressed. _

He sees Katara pull back when Aang kisses her just a little quicker than the Avatar would have liked and turn behind her to look for the familiar scar that announces Zuko's presence.
cuzimaw3som317 chapter 30 . 10/7/2010
...i always have luved Mai. i don't like the Zutara authors who write her as...well...not her. i like this one. like, a lot.
cuzimaw3som317 chapter 29 . 10/7/2010
I luv stories that show the Toph-Zuko friendship. like, a lot.
cuzimaw3som317 chapter 27 . 10/7/2010
yeah. i always luv big brother Sokka.
cuzimaw3som317 chapter 26 . 10/7/2010
yeah. i luv it. :D
cuzimaw3som317 chapter 25 . 10/7/2010
i luv big brother Sokka!
cuzimaw3som317 chapter 23 . 10/7/2010
luv it.
cuzimaw3som317 chapter 21 . 10/7/2010
luv it.
cuzimaw3som317 chapter 18 . 10/7/2010
*cheesy grin*...i luved it. :)
cuzimaw3som317 chapter 17 . 10/7/2010
me luv dis one.
cuzimaw3som317 chapter 15 . 10/7/2010


...*gasp* no no no no no, katara belongs with zuko. that's it, end of story.
cuzimaw3som317 chapter 12 . 10/7/2010
Twilight Phantom Dragon chapter 30 . 10/5/2010
Nicely done. People often justify actions to make themselves feel better, so it's quite realistic. The prose was very pretty and flowed nicely, so congrats on that as well.

I can't wait to see your next update.
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