Reviews for May's Birthday
Crusherboy93 chapter 1 . 1/10/2017
Very nice
doc boy chapter 1 . 8/14/2016
That was beautiful. I loved it. Excellent job. Truly excellent
WarsOfShadows chapter 1 . 2/21/2016
I really liked how it got all emotional in the end and how Ash is SO DAMN DENSE! GAAAAH!
PearlxAdvance chapter 1 . 10/11/2014
That was awesome!
Blt chapter 1 . 9/18/2014
It was really good i loved it so much
Ashujou chapter 1 . 5/14/2014
Simply amazing. The characters aren't too OOC. Nicely done!
ashxmay chapter 1 . 4/22/2014
That a good one shot
cody chapter 1 . 1/16/2014
I'm a sap for a great romance story and I must say this one is right there with the beautiful story you wrote about the final challenge. Your a great writer thank you for your story's.
TheBlazer9 chapter 1 . 5/20/2013
Best advanced shipping story Eva
aukl chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
AWWWWW! Ash is so sweet in this story! Going through all that to get May a present!
Rini17 chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
good i am adding it to my community
SonicBlueBlur chapter 1 . 5/29/2012
Nice story! Poor Ash he's so dense, he gave May a heart-shaped Pokemon and he didn't even know what doing it meant!

PD: Funny thing, I read this the day of my 18th birthday! Really!
Beastmode953 chapter 1 . 11/29/2011
i read this story a while back. Its hilarious! All that effort he put in to get that one Luvdisc. Still a dense Ash but it was sweet. Hope to see you put more stories!
Iamsprezzatura chapter 1 . 5/1/2011
Great story! Keep it up!
GoodyGoodyGuy chapter 1 . 12/12/2010
Funny, I write stories about May & Ash in my journal and I always involve a Luvdisc. Any way, Great job! ;)-wink
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