Reviews for The Deepest Abyss
Sasunaru rules chapter 1 . 5/3/2014
Damn! That was fuckin HOT! Make another chapter or something. I need to recover from my MAJOR nosebleed!
Willow121 chapter 1 . 3/23/2014
It's actually really good. I hope that you'll continue this story instead of just leaving it as a one-shot.
x10TIMEx chapter 1 . 8/2/2013
T T How cute Pretty good for your first time writing lemon X)
SnafooCerious chapter 1 . 11/26/2012
Ya did great! I think you should carry on the story a bit though.I mean, you've peaked peeps intrest bout what happened during Sasu's missing 5mo's. A good author hooks thier reader,mabey tease or string them along a bit,then reveals the answer. At least that's how I feel as a voracious reader,and your stuff is good enough to make my list fer shure. Oh,and as for how you did for your first lemon,my nose is still bleeding! :D
She.Drowned.In.Venom chapter 1 . 3/10/2012
Mmmm... light bondage. Fun times. :) Nice job for a first smut!
roxxihearts chapter 1 . 8/15/2011
pretty good for a first lemon! :D i havent even finished my first lemon...too embarassing QQ
blueyed-demonice chapter 1 . 5/25/2010
This was the best storie i ever read..
Vitty Rose chapter 1 . 5/22/2010
God I loved this so much
ForbiddenLover chapter 1 . 12/19/2009
Damn sweet! I'v been searching for tis kind of story! Awh so sweet! 33

I want it to be happen for real!
Mrs Hatake Itachi chapter 1 . 12/19/2009
Nice story!
ShadowfireNightblade chapter 1 . 12/17/2009
Ryn: (points) LIER! THIS IS TO GOOD TO BE YOUR FIRST SMEXING SCENE!

Cat-chan: O.O (nosebleeds)

Shade: ...What are you yelling about...(reads) This just proves that research and understanding of language (both of which seem to be in short supply around this dorm) can produce a masterpiece like this...Good job...
BeeWhisperer101 chapter 1 . 11/7/2009
Wow

I mean...

Wow

It got me hot and saying "aww" at the same time!

Nice!
Rinkame chapter 1 . 10/27/2009
i think its an amazing oneshot, don't make it have chappies it will make me sad

i WUV this fanfic X3
Lecksyi chapter 1 . 10/27/2009
This was so col~~! , for your first lemon it was very...*cof cof* explicit, but the story was so cute itself, I like the way you write it, without ooc 'em, cuz...gush...I don't like when ppl ooc 'em...DX...oh well...this was a pretty story, congrats! :D
Sans Fire chapter 1 . 10/27/2009
...THAT was your first lemon? OMG! That was amazing! SO CUTE! I love it! X3
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