|Reviews for The Red|
| NiftyKitchenKnives chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
This was perhaps one of the best song-fics/oneshots that I think I may have ever read. The Red is one of my favorite Chevelle songs, which was what drew me initially, but your writing sucked me in. Beautiful and terrible and perfect all seem fitting adjectives for this work, and you have nothing to apologize for. You created something lovely and dynamic (though heart-wrenching at the end) with barely any dialogue, a feat not to be sneezed at. I'm looking forward to reading the rest of your work.
I think I have read this particular bit a few times:
"I love you, InuYasha," she whispered as the life left her.
"Kagome," she heard her name from him, his voice filled with pain and recognition, and saw the red drain out of his eyes slowly as he came back to himself, but it was much too late for either of them now.
| StoryboardMortician chapter 1 . 10/26/2009
...woah. good, but woah.
| Kikiome chapter 1 . 10/25/2009
No that is so sad but great song story. Kagome come back lol.