|Reviews for Logical Fallacy|
| Demoninmysoul chapter 12 . 2/20
Can you do a separate, alternative ending where they live, and build a new life, like they had before? One where I'm not drowning in my tears by the end?
It was a great story but it was anticlimatic at best...
| feathers chapter 12 . 2/9
Wow. It was a compelling read, but why isn't it under "Tragedy?"
| MissTonks21 chapter 12 . 2/1
I liked it and I didn't and mostly I just really wish you had tortured Bill more
| PandasWearGlasses chapter 12 . 1/1
I don't know why, but for some reason, as I read it, I kept expecting this story to have a happy ending. Even as it got closer and closer to the sorry end, and became more and more obvious that nothing good could come out of it, I held on to some small notion that they would join in holy matrimony and live, if not happily ever after in love, then at least together in odd companionship.
Thank you, for being one of the rare authors on this website that can handle being cruel to their characters. Thank you for not caving at the last minute, and allowing Bill and Harry to find peace together, even in death, because such an ending would have been all wrong for this story.
Thanks for making me cry,
| A Nest of Nargles chapter 12 . 12/29/2013
i actually really hate this story. i mean it was good, brilliant in fact, but i hate the plot and how it went down and how it turned out in the end, harry and bill lead fucked up lives. I guess this is one of those things you call terrible but great. and yes it's going on my favorites list, you made one fucked up piece of art.
| indigoshift13 chapter 12 . 12/11/2013
That was seriously the most depressing thing I have ever read. I hate you. But it was very well written and so I read till the end and its no ones fault but my own. but I still hate you. just a little bit.
| youngsoo chapter 12 . 12/9/2013
you just killed me when you had bill kill harry. i dont know what to say...i think i liked the story..but im so depressed now
| CharmedArtist chapter 12 . 12/8/2013
That was terrible :( Oh, the writing was excellent and the story well-done, but it makes me feel so hollow :( Great job, though 3
| Guest chapter 12 . 11/27/2013
So desperately sad...Harry really looked like he was at the end of his rope coming there yet he set an ultimatum to Bill and plainly asked the guy if he 'wanted' to go back to the girl like it was the last confirmation he needed to be sure and, in the end, if he was; life really jus didn't matter. The teensy bit that comfort me about Harry's state is that I suppose he gained a bit of life while going with Snape for how little it lasted, I guess.
| fangirl chapter 12 . 11/20/2013
this was a great read that won't leave my mind for a long while
I was still waiting for my happy ending despite the flow of the story but I have to say that I still love the story so much
thank you for your efforts
| RGN chapter 12 . 11/20/2013
wow. i really kept hoping for a happy ending, but having read this to the end I realize that that just wouldn't have fit. Thanks.
| Roxanne Saint-Agnes chapter 12 . 11/10/2013
So, i just finished, and i loved your work.
I got here after readind the visionary, and i found what you write very dark and somewhat disturbing, but in a good way.
I don't know if you still reads your reviews, since these fics haven't been updated ina while.
but if you do, pleaaaase consider geting back st visionary? prety please?
anyway, i think you're great.
| The Sucker chapter 12 . 10/11/2013
damn that was... sad and depressing. I blame it on my period but i cried a little bit at the end.
| 917brat chapter 12 . 9/18/2013
damn the story had me bailing and in the end I think Bill did learn he had a bit of love in his heart for Harry at least...too bad it was too late for that huh?
| Imperial Raven chapter 12 . 8/3/2013
It's so sad.. To think that such souls are out there... I cried. But it was a well-written story, nonetheless. Well done.