|Reviews for dangerous love|
| ellyjane chapter 1 . 11/16/2010
You want the truth?
It's terrible. I got lost after the first line.
PUNCTACTION - If that's how you spell it ''/
I know this probably isn't what you want to hear, but to be a good writier, you need to read your writing through. Check you pause for a breath every now and then. If you carry on writing, good luck.
| Valerie chapter 1 . 1/11/2010
| please write more chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
please write more dude please please please write more its really great oh and each time someone else talk you start anew paragraph
| TuckedAway chapter 1 . 12/7/2009
I like your story! It is pretty good! I hope you write more! Check out my flirt series stories: rOOFTOP AND brittany b brogan- attorney at law!