Reviews for Hormones
Hp35413531 chapter 1 . 6/26
dotted it was so good up until the ending. the ending needs work
jazzstar02 chapter 1 . 4/28/2014
awwwwwwwww
danimaltauro chapter 1 . 3/18/2014
Really good!
Syreneh chapter 1 . 1/10/2014
I feel ya, Lily, I really do
fourevertris chapter 1 . 11/30/2013
awwwwww!
padfoottomyprongs chapter 1 . 7/24/2013
Funny!
diggzer chapter 1 . 5/30/2013
Haha, I know JUST how Lily feels! About the hormones, I mean, not about staring at half-naked Quidditch players. :P
kitkatlover4 chapter 1 . 4/13/2013
I forgot how much I loved this story. James and Lily are so cute together. The whole thing makes me smile ear to ear. :)
MuggleCreator chapter 1 . 10/29/2012
Good stuff. Hormones indeed. Lily ought to feel lucky they didn't hit her proper until she was properly in her teens, though.
thewitchisdead chapter 1 . 4/7/2012
i can say i enjoy long descriptions about james potter's hot body, hurrays for sexual tension and hormonal lily
NotMyBestSide chapter 1 . 10/15/2011
Sexual tension: hip, hip, hooray!

Whew that was fun.

I really really enjoyed that.

Hormone rants are amazing.

Especially this one.

Or can this be called a rant?

I don't know.

Rightly, I don't really care.

It was just amazing.

And I'll leave it at that.

...

But the hormone thing?

So true.

I mean... shouldn't it be a crime...

to walk around shirtless

when there are perfectly good shirts

dying to be worn?

But then again...

it's all fine and dandy,

until they notice.

Then it's "Ah, crap."

...

And shirtless James Potter?

How could Lily resist?

SHE COULDN'T.

...

Alright now I'm just going on about nothing.

So I'm going to quit now.

Before I make a fool out of myself.

A bigger fool that is.

...

Good job.

...

:)
quill.is.mightier chapter 1 . 5/1/2011
TEN cheers for sexual tension- haha. Get it? TENsion? Anyhoo, loved it! Now I get to imagine shirtless James instead of studying for finals :)
Amanda chapter 1 . 4/23/2011
lol hilarious!
deleted111 chapter 1 . 4/14/2011
hell yeahhh :) great x
SlyThoef chapter 1 . 8/12/2010
I just had to day good story! Good idea it was,the story I plot was very simple.
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