|Reviews for When Stars Begin to Fall|
| carismum chapter 1 . 11/13/2010
I thought this was an excellent idea of how Hawaii five 0 came into being and it was great to see you managed to include danny Williams as well!
| dialee chapter 1 . 10/30/2008
This is the very first story of the Hawaii 5-0 fanfiction world. It is very very good in terms of the writing style and mechanics. Do you intend or do you write professionally? I also like the story and the different elements: the beginning of Five-0, meeting with Dan Williams for the first time, relationship between Williams and Chin Ho. These elements were well-put together. What I thought were some weak spots were the character of McGarrett and his reasons for changing careers from Navy to Five-0. The star of the original TV show as McGarrett but your story is more an ensemble which I like.
| Kelly chapter 1 . 10/28/2006
Hey what happen to Duke Lukala everybody fav HPD officer
I seen him as friend of Steve back in US Navys days