Reviews for Amnesia
desiderata-girl chapter 1 . 6/4/2011
hello ! I'm friench so please forgive me if my english sound really weird ;_; (I used google traduction to write this reviews because I really wanted to express my feelings the best way possible) a friend recommended me your fanfiction, then she specifically told me about your other fanfiction "the benefists of amnesia" but not very good in English, I preferred to start slowly with this one shot. I enjoyed (even if I had used some of the translator to understand some words) being an avid fan of GaaHina I look forward to reading your other fanfiction, at least when I have time because I seems it is quite long and reading in English takes me more time unfortunately. And I would really appreciate to the fullest.

In any case, I find your style very readable, the rhythm between the dialogues and the story is really well organized, it's clear, airy. I really curse my shortcomings in English for not being able to fully enjoy your talent. However I intend to get better so you can leave many reviews about The benefists of Amnesia!
onedirection394 chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
love this story! Im usually a naruhina fan but this story is so good! :D
bindedtogether chapter 1 . 3/26/2011

I love how well you captured each character's personality.

Very well written also!
Fenris Jin chapter 1 . 3/8/2011
Ahhh.. Gaara can be so.. possessive and passive at the same time..

Ah, lovely work! GaaHina rules in this story!
TheBlueFoxtrot A Samba chapter 1 . 12/3/2010
I am newly in love with the Gaara/Hinata pairing. That was extremely satisfying. Thank you for writing it.
DineyBlue chapter 1 . 11/30/2010
LOVE IT! Can't wait to read the extended version.
LilBlueBear chapter 1 . 10/28/2010
MAKE A SEQUEL! or side story of hinata x gaara! LOL
ahbuggrit chapter 1 . 10/28/2010
Nice one-shot. :)

Good writing style and language.

FranHyuuga chapter 1 . 8/14/2010
Oh, God...

Nice! This history it's very good! Congratulations!
SOKiiE chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
One of the best GaaHina's i've ever read :)

i think i'll check your SasuHina fic.s too
Plastic Cello chapter 1 . 7/22/2010
Beautifully written; I am in awe of your writing style, you painted an amazingly vivid picture and I enjoyed your characterization of everyone in the story.

Hinata believing she was still a twelve year old girl was thoroughly entertaining, and her inevitable look-over in the mirror made me laugh. But I enjoyed the tenderness about Gaara the most, on how he watched over her throughout the entire ordeal.

I have to say this is one of the best stories I've read in a very long time. :)
TeddyBearHugs chapter 1 . 6/21/2010
Aww! The story is so cute! I loved the plot. My friend reccommended this story and I thought I should read it. You definately turned me into a Gaara/Hinata fan!
ProjXPsyClone chapter 1 . 5/9/2010
So glad you remade this into a long series.

It's really awesome.

Both of them awesome
Surreal Yume chapter 1 . 3/12/2010
XD i imagine it would be scary not to remember anything exspecialy that your married
Kid Crisis chapter 1 . 1/9/2010
I've read this story like, ten times, it never gets boring. I just wish the multi-chap fic of this would get posted. There aren't many good Gaara/Hinata fics on this site, and this one-shot is probably the best anyway. Please, please, please, post it back up!
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