|Reviews for Amnesia|
| desiderata-girl chapter 1 . 6/4/2011
hello ! I'm friench so please forgive me if my english sound really weird ;_; (I used google traduction to write this reviews because I really wanted to express my feelings the best way possible) a friend recommended me your fanfiction, then she specifically told me about your other fanfiction "the benefists of amnesia" but not very good in English, I preferred to start slowly with this one shot. I enjoyed (even if I had used some of the translator to understand some words) being an avid fan of GaaHina I look forward to reading your other fanfiction, at least when I have time because I seems it is quite long and reading in English takes me more time unfortunately. And I would really appreciate to the fullest.
In any case, I find your style very readable, the rhythm between the dialogues and the story is really well organized, it's clear, airy. I really curse my shortcomings in English for not being able to fully enjoy your talent. However I intend to get better so you can leave many reviews about The benefists of Amnesia!
| onedirection394 chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
love this story! Im usually a naruhina fan but this story is so good! :D
| bindedtogether chapter 1 . 3/26/2011
AMAZING ONE SHOT!
I love how well you captured each character's personality.
Very well written also!
| Fenris Jin chapter 1 . 3/8/2011
Ahhh.. Gaara can be so.. possessive and passive at the same time..
Ah, lovely work! GaaHina rules in this story!
| TheBlueFoxtrot A Samba chapter 1 . 12/3/2010
I am newly in love with the Gaara/Hinata pairing. That was extremely satisfying. Thank you for writing it.
| DineyBlue chapter 1 . 11/30/2010
LOVE IT! Can't wait to read the extended version.
| LilBlueBear chapter 1 . 10/28/2010
MAKE A SEQUEL! or side story of hinata x gaara! LOL
| ahbuggrit chapter 1 . 10/28/2010
Nice one-shot. :)
Good writing style and language.
| FranHyuuga chapter 1 . 8/14/2010
Nice! This history it's very good! Congratulations!
| SOKiiE chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
One of the best GaaHina's i've ever read :)
i think i'll check your SasuHina fic.s too
| Plastic Cello chapter 1 . 7/22/2010
Beautifully written; I am in awe of your writing style, you painted an amazingly vivid picture and I enjoyed your characterization of everyone in the story.
Hinata believing she was still a twelve year old girl was thoroughly entertaining, and her inevitable look-over in the mirror made me laugh. But I enjoyed the tenderness about Gaara the most, on how he watched over her throughout the entire ordeal.
I have to say this is one of the best stories I've read in a very long time. :)
| TeddyBearHugs chapter 1 . 6/21/2010
Aww! The story is so cute! I loved the plot. My friend reccommended this story and I thought I should read it. You definately turned me into a Gaara/Hinata fan!
| ProjXPsyClone chapter 1 . 5/9/2010
So glad you remade this into a long series.
It's really awesome.
Both of them awesome
| Surreal Yume chapter 1 . 3/12/2010
XD i imagine it would be scary not to remember anything exspecialy that your married
| Kid Crisis chapter 1 . 1/9/2010
I've read this story like, ten times, it never gets boring. I just wish the multi-chap fic of this would get posted. There aren't many good Gaara/Hinata fics on this site, and this one-shot is probably the best anyway. Please, please, please, post it back up!