Reviews for Concessions
Guest chapter 5 . 3/1
heh, naruto's friend-no-jutsu is strong as ever I see.
chau chapter 7 . 2/20
You just said that chapter 8 is definitely coming out early.. If early for you takes many years then I don't know what's forever for you... haaaayyyyy
Anonymous Person chapter 7 . 2/1
Despite the fact I'm pretty sure the answer will be no, I'm going ask anyway. Is Naruto the only person to have gone back in time? I can't help but find the fact that Sasuke had latched onto him so quickly/suddenly to be odd.
TheOfficialDreamer chapter 7 . 1/21
I am utterly amazed with this story!
my 2 guys chapter 7 . 1/20
that was good keep the chapters coming
To Fall Into Deprivation chapter 7 . 1/14
Don't know if you're even active anymore
But I love the character your building and I really hope that you continue with this story
ArghThePirate chapter 7 . 1/11
I love it! Please update as soon as possible! Thanks so much and please keep up the great work!
Everything chapter 5 . 1/5
This chapter did not make a lick of sense. I thought there were guards outside the yondaime's house too: I'm sure minato isn't stupid enough to leave his son with only the housekeeper / helper/ babysitter. Also naiko was incredibly stupid. Even if she was alone, and intended to really save Naruto from these enemy Nin, she should've fought shiba when they were still alone in the house, and alerted the shinobi close to the house or even minato. You did explain that due to the panic and adrenalin rush, she forgot about the summoning/teleportation bracelet that he had. (Also, another plothole was that in the first few chapters, the teleportation bracelet was a secret. Only minato knew that the thing would enable him to teleport to where naiko is). instead Naiko stupidly grabbed Naruto (a
casualty) and proceeded to follow shiba to the forest where she will be alone and more vulnerable to attacks from many others. I know that she panicked but she was /is a shinobi. Even from a civilian standpoint, that was incredibly stupid. Also, minato you do not just forgive and invite a possible "traitor" to the konoha military police. That was a sob story that you should study more into. He should investigate further. But what he did was replicate his earlier mistake of not investigating further into the background of this woman. That was an utterly convenient and stupid thing to continue with the plot you know. What is wrong with the people here? What happened to the team that was supposed to be protecting Naruto? If they were there, they not only let a fake-kakashi go near that house, they also let him and naiko get away with the child, like what the fudge. The story looked interesting, but I'll probably stop here (chap 5). I'm disappointed with this development. Suddenly, everyone wasn't thinking logically. Like seriously
777angeloflove chapter 7 . 12/27/2016
lumi16 chapter 7 . 11/13/2016
actualiza por favor! quiero saber como la continuas! lo exijo como tu seguidora! ;)
Rohan Cedrice chapter 6 . 10/1/2016
Oh no. I'm reading this again.
I just love overprotective Minato - don't you?
Silver wolf chapter 7 . 10/1/2016
Poor Naruto having to be drooled on!
Please update your story soon!
Rohan Cedrice chapter 7 . 9/30/2016
I knew this wasn't finished. I already checked- but I still wasn't prepared at all for the feeling of being left unfinished on that extent.

Asdfghjkl. It was going well too! I realize that inspiration for writing fan fiction for anime like Naruto can come and go because of the things happening in the canon but I'm dismayed that I wasn't able to find this story and tell you how much I liked your writing. I really really love this story. I can only imagine what happens next but at least me say thank you for sharing this world to me. I totally enjoyed it while it lasted. And I do realize that this is a message five years to late.

I can only hope you are doing well and good Author-san. Safe journey!
the white wolf Haruka chapter 7 . 9/19/2016
LOVE this story ! :)
taran taran chapter 7 . 8/30/2016
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