Reviews for The First Kick
Rosetta Brunestud chapter 1 . 3/3/2011
Awwnnn! Cute drabble!

Yeah, it's a boy! A wonderful boy! DD


rockyshadow chapter 1 . 12/15/2009
John and Mary are so cute with their talk about the baby. Even before birth it's obvious that Dean agrees that he will never be a gymnast or a girl.
LivingForTv chapter 1 . 10/28/2009
Yeah, well girls can kick too:-) But I'll allow John his moment here:-)
Micaiah chapter 1 . 10/27/2009
Aw, how sweet and heartbreaking since we know the other side of the story.
KKBELVIS chapter 1 . 10/26/2009
So adorable...the baby boy inside letting them know he was no girl...LOL...

Nicely done...great insight to Mary and John and the normal life they lead for a time being.

Thank you for sharing your imagination and talent!

CiZiwejes chapter 1 . 10/26/2009
Aww...this is so sweet. John knowing for sure the baby's a boy. Sad at the same time seeing how they had plans for the kid's future but later found out they were already planned. Great drabble.
KatyMM chapter 1 . 10/26/2009
Hm, methinks that is Dean then? LOL Sweet moment.
Tribble Master chapter 1 . 10/26/2009
That's so adorable. I love it! Very orginall. Write on!
anon chapter 1 . 10/25/2009
Aww pre-wee-Deanie!
SimplyOut chapter 1 . 10/25/2009
possibly one of the most cutest things I've ever read!
bhoney chapter 1 . 10/25/2009
Aw, very sweet. I recently wrote a story with pregnant Mary and first-time-time father John. I love to think of them during that time period. This was great.
chibii67 chapter 1 . 10/25/2009
"No son of mine is going to be a gymnast"

That's so typical of a father *rolls eyes* but the idea of them sharing that special moment (people say is special, I haven't had the chance to experiment it myself) is so... cute? That's mild, but I don't find a better word. I was wondering if it was Mary's first or second pregnancy, probably the first, otherwise you might have included little Dean right? I must be wrong either way.

Sweet and short, I loved it (:
silver ruffian chapter 1 . 10/25/2009
I really liked this. Thanks for sharing!
Noninone chapter 1 . 10/25/2009
So cute!
Mad Server chapter 1 . 10/25/2009
Oh John. :)