Not Carlisle! Wow so much heartbreak in this story. I really hope she does go after them and they destroy Victoria.

James seems very canon.

Apt title for this story! I hated to see Carlisle's demise. Great writing.

I hate Victoria, so much. James is such a sick vampire! At least Bella and Edward have each other now.

At first I thought it was Edward. Interesting beginning.

Holy crap!
I usually try to avoid darker themes but I was curious and oh man!
I've said before I love your writing style, it wraps you up and you can see it in your minds eye as if it is actually happening as you read.
It was such an amazing ride.

Well written as always, but I have to admit you shook me more than once with James' take no prisoners approach. Not that I'd expect him to have any mercy, but this one was the most evil I've ever seen. Yikes.

Edward's reaction to and love for Bella was as intense as it should be. It was a necessary reprieve from the tension of the rest of the story. And I loved your version of Alice's early history with Edward. Made perfect sense. Amazing fic all around!

Such an amazing story, thank you! It does seem
You leave it open for a sequel, but if not, I’d like to think that Victoria eventually meets her end.

Sequel?

I can’t believe you killed off Carlisle!

So glad James is gone! Great fight scene.

That wasn’t very smart, Bella! Hope you didn’t kill off Carlisle!

How horrible for Alice!

Can’t wait for James to meet his demise

So much death!