|Reviews for Polar Night|
| MoCullen chapter 6 . 11/25/2011
So, so good! Exactly what Breaking Dawn should have been.
| MoCullen chapter 1 . 11/25/2011
I really want to read this although I can see that you haven't completed it or updated it in a while. Will you be updating soon?
| PeepToe chapter 16 . 11/24/2011
So sorry to see this on hiatus. Have to say that the last few chapters-from where thru figure it out through their return to Forks-are some of the most beautiful passages I have read in a long time. Can't wait for the rest!
| cheryl moreno chapter 12 . 11/15/2011
Well, I'm very conflicted, I don't know how I feel about a pregnancy. I really would love for Edward to have a child, he did seem filled with longing when talking to Bella about it. But then, if she gets pregnant, here comes all the drama, pain and suffering for Edward. I guess it's fairly clear who I favor, can't help it, I love that boy!
| cheryl moreno chapter 11 . 11/15/2011
I am really captivated by this story, I don't want to stop reading long enough to write something, but I will because you use your own time to write this for us. And I truly, truly appreciate that you do. I'm just wondering if this problem with the Volturi is taking the place of the pregnancy. And why would the volturi want Emmett and Rosalie, they really have no special talents, well Emmett is very powerful, but Rosalie?
| cheryl m chapter 10 . 11/11/2011
WOW! That was hot! Enough said.
| cheryl m chapter 7 . 11/9/2011
Fantastic, I could almost feel the passion myself! You are very talented,you could get published. I love these stories, thanks.
| Linnamedeiros chapter 2 . 10/22/2011
Just so u know: this is my favorite fanfic EVER! re-reading it for the 39173891...273987 time! DD
| Tish the Dish chapter 10 . 10/9/2011
Whew! I've been holding my breath for so long! Finally, this was awesome. I love Bella's tenacity and Edward's reluctance is almost endearing. Their coming together at the end of this chapter was close to a spiritual experience. Loved it.
| kaday chapter 16 . 10/1/2011
I hope you will finish this story. You are very talented
| rpattzgirl chapter 16 . 7/25/2011
First off, I love this & prelude so much I'm just sadded that you haven't updated for over a year :(
| EternallyCullen chapter 16 . 7/13/2011
Oh no... please please tell me you intend on finishing this? I read Prelude and this (as well as all of TPOL) over the past two days and I have adored them. Didn't think to check if this was complete or not. It's a wonderful and way more believable take on Breaking Dawn... so very well written and you have me hooked. I know canon isn't as popular as AH (I prefer to write AU and Canon, but my AH fics always get more attention. *shrugs*
Anyway, I am begging you to let me have more on this... I want to find out what happens when Bella and Edward head off to college... and of course Kaure's response to Bella's "note"... and the Volturi... and Bella's eventual transformation. This is awesome stuff you have written here and I know it's been over a year since you updated, but it really is very good.
| Julia-S77 chapter 1 . 6/23/2011
You have beautifully captured Edward's emotions before the wedding xx
| M474 chapter 1 . 6/20/2011
that was really cute! I loved that he couldn't keep himself downstairs! great lead-up btw
| 11Lover chapter 16 . 6/2/2011
hello. just wanted to let you know that i really like this story. i was wondering if you were going to update it and continue on with it? i hope so!