|Reviews for Polar Night|
| bmthespian chapter 2 . 10/30/2009
| jerseyhalliwell chapter 2 . 10/30/2009
amazingly written chapter :)
love the edward/esme mother and son bonding scene!
| Aslyone39 chapter 2 . 10/30/2009
Aw I loved his point of view! Like this story already!
| J. Anne Brown chapter 2 . 10/29/2009
Ah, Marie...that was so good. At the beginning, I cried. In the middle, I laughed (the cake! SO funny!). At the end, I was panting for more. More! Now! ;) Wonderful.
| louisedmn chapter 2 . 10/29/2009
Hey, thanks for the great
chapter. Enjoying the story.
| trini36 chapter 2 . 10/29/2009
of course i liked it. you have so much talent and everytime i get something from you is a gift . thanks so much, you have no idea the smile you put on my face. keep it up
| aerobee82 chapter 2 . 10/29/2009
You've written this exactly as Edward would be thinking and feeling, in my opinion. I can't wait for the next chapter!
| Cullen0128 chapter 2 . 10/29/2009
I loved reading about Edwards pov of the wedding i think you did a great job of capturing the magic of this day. Update soon
| baynewen chapter 2 . 10/29/2009
Both chapters were utterly amazing, it wasn't until after I read them that I realized you didn't describe to death the decorations, clothing, and gowns. By doing so you allowed our imaginations a place in your story,thanks. Yet you created a fairytale environment filled with love and romance, that was just amazing!
Your story also created a visually stunning picture in my head, and you made my heart feel all the emotions and humour, after all you can't leave out the antics of Jasper, Emmett and Mike Newton, even though it was subtle, and of course the prophetic threats of the pixie (every family should have an Alice).
It is truly a great work when you can encompass all the characters that you did in these 2 chapters and not feel like anyone was neglected.
Hope you plan to continue the story!
| favludo chapter 2 . 10/29/2009
Lovely! Thanks for posting so quickly
| Maki-san chapter 2 . 10/29/2009
Of course is wonderful, I feel so sad about Edward, why did he invite the dog? I can't get it oh well, I love to know what Edward were thinking it's amazing, I would like to be your official translator.. but you write marvelous I couldn't translate your beautiful writing it's up level for me...
please continue, and don't forget the newborn .
| Charlotte Salyers chapter 2 . 10/29/2009
Don't get me wrong. I fell in love with Edward and Bella Thanks to Stephanie Meyers. And her discription of the wedding brought tears to my eyes. But your rendition of the wedding as seen through Edward's eyes was even better. I wish I had her email. She would love to read this and know that she has inspired a truely gifted writer. Thank you for taking time to share your talent with us.
| sherryola chapter 2 . 10/29/2009
I absolutely, totally, loved that chapter! love your interpretation of what edward was thinking and feeling. loved the thoughts of everyone as relayed by edward. Loved the romance of it too. But, yikes, what a place to end the chapter! Can't wait to see what edward thinks of what's going to happen next.
| Lacy-Jane chapter 2 . 10/29/2009
Fabulous chapter! I loved the part where he took off her garter, that was great.
| Mooshooes chapter 1 . 10/28/2009
Wow. You really capture the same tone as the books! Can't wait for more.