Reviews for Two Seconds and a Half
Rainey chapter 1 . 1/22/2010
Fantastic! You manage to pack a lot of intensity into a few short sentences.
losttimelady chapter 1 . 11/12/2009
An excellent piece. I like the use of short sentences and the continual use of first person pronouns. I also like the order in which he thinks about "Caroline. My son. And Gina.". A powerful piece and a fine addition to the MV section of . Well done.
Litany Riddle chapter 1 . 10/28/2009
Voilà la review ! J'espère que ça marchera...
The Sheriff chapter 1 . 10/27/2009
Wonderful! look forward as usual to reading more as again w/ detail it is as if I am you. Regards The Sheriff.
ece23 chapter 1 . 10/26/2009
I've never watched MV, as you know, but I wanted to read this because you wrote it. You convey feeling so well with your writing, and this little drabble is powerful and beautiful!