|Reviews for Casualties of Desire|
| elizabeth bennette chapter 8 . 3/10
Hope you will get a chance to finish story. Thanks
| brenda.warren.1257 chapter 8 . 9/20/2016
IS THT VICTORIAAAFTER CARLISLE OR TANYA AFTER EDWAR?AND WHO IS THE PERSONTAT FOUNF IM FOR HER AND WHY?WHEN WILL THE NEXT CHAPTER BE UP.
| brenda.warren.1257 chapter 2 . 9/20/2016
HOW COULD THIS AFFECT HER MARRIAGE DONT GET IT WILL AFFECT THE WHOLE AS A FAMILY BUT NOTEACH INDUVIAL RIFGT?
| brenda.warren.1257 chapter 1 . 9/19/2016
WHO WAS THAT AND WHO WERE THEY TALKING ABOUT? IS IT SOMEONE TO CAUSE TROUBLE?
| i.luv.twilight2 chapter 8 . 1/6/2015
Did Jasper do anything to hurt the baby? Or falsify Bella 's medical records? Why was the background check ordered by Carlisle missing the information of Rosalie having a cousin who worked at Carlisle's hospital? Did Victoria kidnap Bella thinking it was Alice in her attempt to get Carlisle? So many possibilities! I know this story is on hiatus but I really really hope you continue it!
| LizziePaige chapter 8 . 3/28/2014
Feel like hitting my head repeatedly on my desk right about now! I read that this story was on long term hiatus but started to read it anyway...silly,silly me! I LOVE this story and these characters. There is so much going on and the story could unfold in so many ways. I really do hope that you get back to this one at some stage, these characters deserve to have their story told and I would love to see how it all pans out. Thank you for them :)
| missme42 chapter 8 . 1/12/2014
you should update this story its really good thanks
| snoopylover60 chapter 8 . 8/11/2013
So, I read where you never going to finish this. Then I went ahead and I read it. (duh, what a idiot) I would love to see this finished.
yeah, you need to finish it!
| Guest chapter 4 . 4/3/2013
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| Guest chapter 8 . 8/15/2012
A Curious mind wants to know What happened? Loved What you have written so far...
| PCCTwiFF23 chapter 6 . 3/10/2012
So maybe if this anonymous person isn't there for Edward, then maybe it's someone from Carlisle's past? Am I reaching here? Oh, what? Oh yeah, I'll keep reading, maybe the reveal will be somewhere between chapters 7 & 8? Ok, I'll keep reading...and I'm jumping oj the bandwagon and thoroughly hating on Emmett and Rosalie! And oj my god, wow, Bella was kidnapped when she was a child? That's so horribly sad and tragic!
| PCCTwiFF23 chapter 3 . 3/10/2012
Emmett, Emmett, Emmett...what a selfish, blind fussy you are... Couldn't keep it in your pants for two years without being a real man and divorce his wife when be realized that he truly doesn't love her? Wow. Good job at painting a somewhat confused and a lot lost Emmett. Of course he had to throw in the "perfect" B/E insults. And hmmm, so is it glaringly obvious that the Eddie Rosalie's cousin "briefly" dated is the same Edward here? And was the anonymous woman on the phone the said cousin? And does Rosalie know? Was she the one on the phone telling the anonymous person on the other end of the phone that she found him? Great foreshadowing in the previous chapter (i think it was there or was it this chapter?) where Bella feels like her life is going to take a downward spiral. And how long have B/E been together? Since childhood? If so, how did Edward date someone else? Did he cheat it were they on a break? Oooh, I really hope you continue soon and again, I offer my help in any capacity!
| PCCTwiFF23 chapter 1 . 3/10/2012
Hmm, I know you tabled this as being on long term hiatus but the story description/summary just intrigued me so much! So I decided to read what you've posted anyway and will put it on alert! Don't know your reasons why you put it on hold & frankly none of our business as to why, BUT even though I'm sure you already have support out there for your writing, I'd like to offer my help in any way when/if you decide to continue the story. I've only read the first chapter so far but I already see all the potential his story has, especially with the cliffhanger at the chapter's end and from an anonymous POV no less! Way to hike up the intrigue! Lol
| Clumzy.Person chapter 8 . 11/27/2011
please, please, please
| edward'sbella17 chapter 6 . 6/9/2011
i hope you decide to continue this. its going to make a fantastic full story