Reviews for The Unwanted
MoonyFull chapter 15 . 8/19/2013
it's a very cute story *-*
fanservice-chan chapter 15 . 4/17/2012
That was soooooo cute Pie! I swear if you took out all the names and relations to Kingdom Hearts, you could so make this a book! At first I didn't really want to read it (because I don't really like the whole Vampires vs. Werewolves issue) but tried the first chapter and I got hooked! Keep writing, Pie!
Uncle Xigbar chapter 15 . 10/27/2011
I just loved it! I was in suspence, shock and on the verge of tears at several moments. But all in all, i was amazed, seeing the whole thing play out in my mind.
Thome R chapter 15 . 3/11/2011
This was amazing. I read the whole thing in one sitting. You have a gift my friend.
Anarane-Sensei chapter 15 . 11/17/2010
This was AWESOME! I can't remember the last time I was able to read a fanfic this good. I sooo love you for this! Thank you for putting this up 3
Shiniboo chapter 13 . 10/7/2010
This is such a good story and idea; I am loving this~! 3 It's definitely one of the interesting and not downplayed supernatural stories. [: Great work!
Shadow of the Forgotten Ones chapter 15 . 8/4/2010
awwwwww loved the story
Im standing behind you chapter 15 . 7/19/2010
Just thought this a review~ I'm surprised it doesn't have a lot more. I love revolutions like this. I never pictured Marluxia as a Gandhi-like character, but now that you put the idea in my head it kind of works xD

Positive review 1 more.
PinkDemons chapter 15 . 6/30/2010
This story was just. Wow. WowowowowWOW. Truely amazing. The BEST fanfiction I have ever read, by far. I absolutely adore how you protested all of the characters. This was just so amazing to read. I have been thinking about a doujinshi for this, but a shame I am too lazy and procrastinated too much to ever do anything of the sort. XD

Anyway. All in all, this was amazing. I still can't believe how wonderful this was written. A great ending to a fantastic story! 3
Nekotsubasa chapter 15 . 6/27/2010
Did it HAVE to end? D;

Seriously though, this story was so amazing and beautiful. I don't think it's a story that I'm just going to forget. XD
Light Within Darkness chapter 15 . 6/23/2010

I would have preferred Sora to come out of the sky as an angel and pwn Riku (because Sora is my most FAVORITE character EVER ) but Zexion doing it is just as well. (lol) And four-year old werewolf!Sora gives me an adorable mental image. I can't even imagine Larxene with kids, but you made me believe it.

That was just so amazing the way this story ended, with Riku being the villain and getting his comeuppance, and then the Marked becoming free, then finally the lovely image of the statues in Trafalgar Square. Now if I ever go there, I'll think "Hey, that's where Pie set the climax of her story!" And nothing else.

Never stop writing Pie. You're just so epic, it's beyond description.
Nekotsubasa chapter 14 . 6/21/2010
This chapter was awesome.

There's not much more to say. The whole revolution is jumped full of awesome.

But now that the Organization has arrived, I fear a bad ending.
XxXBittersweet DreamsXxX chapter 13 . 5/15/2010
Wow this chapter was awsome. PLEASE upate soon, and can you pretty please with cherries on top add a graphic sex see 411 needs it :D
gernard chapter 13 . 4/19/2010
This story just gets more interesting by every chapter! i hope you continue soon!
XxXBittersweet DreamsXxX chapter 1 . 4/14/2010
This is the best story ever!
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