Reviews for In the Line of Fire
Guest chapter 21 . 7/16/2015
-heartbreaks,shakes with anger- oh would wish james or patrick had killed aint got nothing on me when people make my baby jeffy cry.
Guest chapter 17 . 7/16/2015
Guest chapter 7 . 7/16/2015
Guest chapter 6 . 7/16/2015
NeroAnne chapter 21 . 12/7/2009
Alright, I know I skipped some reviews but I'll go back to them...I just couldn't stop reading...

-_- guys killed off Patrick! *whines* He was so cool!

GRR! XD! I SO am not fond of Mark at the moment! But the again, Patrick was a sick, creepy little bastard..who would blame him?

...OH SHIT BALLZ! You ended Tom also?


What's wrong with you people? This isn't nice! XD!


Mah...this'll only make things more interesting though...

Well...I guess I'll read the secod sequel then..

BRILLIANT fic, btw.
NeroAnne chapter 8 . 12/7/2009
..It's another Hardy! XD!

Haa, XP! Why do they all hate each other? XD!


The locket..oh, that is so sad.

Even MARK is upset about that shit...dude, that's just sick.

..His TOOTH?

WTF, man?

Who would do that to poor Connor?

NeroAnne chapter 7 . 12/7/2009
They're like cats and dogs! Dayum, XD. No wonder there's sexual tension!

Patrick's got nearly the whole clan! All he needs is...

Oh hell.

LOL. XD! Jeff.

LMAO. Cooper just curses up a fucking storm! XD!

WOOT, love how Tom forced Coop to do what he wants.

...Oh Brilliant! It starts!
NeroAnne chapter 6 . 12/7/2009
Shit, it's getting infected?

SHEESH. Talk about snapping!

Poor dudes..

Patrick is just SO evil, XD! RAD!


Give him one, Jeff!

Poor Snoopy, XD.


LOOK! They have things in common!


He called Connor GIRLY?

He's dead.

...Or...Connor's dead.


ah, shit.

Must read more..
NeroAnne chapter 5 . 12/7/2009
He woke up!

Look at him! His cool self...XD. LOL!

STUBBORN! XD! but that's what makes them, them dude!

Ouch, man! The KNEE.

Patrick sounds familiar...XD.

Connor's wandering...NOT. GOOD.

XD! The dog had the damn paper! WIN!

Loved Cooper's little sentence about doing something stupid, XD

Uh ohs...
NeroAnne chapter 4 . 12/7/2009
...That whole chapter was just kiss! XD! I love it!

XD! HAHAHAHAHAH! XD! Cooper bottomed for Tom! Brilliantly done, too! XD!

Wonder if the boys will suspect...

...Oh you TEASE...that is NOT cool! XD! Why would you do that?

I so wanted that to be real...*sighs*

Ah, well...better with it next time!
NeroAnne chapter 3 . 12/7/2009
Cooper...worried about Mark? Hmm..


HAH, the cops that don't look like them always get ya..asses...

...SEE?HELLO! It's the CALMNESS in him! XP!

...Didn't call back...oh shizzlez! XD!

He even LIES steady. Not many people can do that.

...Laugh at me, but I've never seen Titanic. Is it symbolic or something?

XD. Patrick is cool, XD! Can't stop saying that or thinking it!

Well yeah...he needed to do a BIT of cheating to get James down.


Let's go!
NeroAnne chapter 2 . 12/7/2009
...Why do the glasses have holes in them?

XD! Did Lizzie and Snoopy go off to fuck? XD!

Haha, XP Scary thought James killing peeps, XD! Not really! XD! At least, not anymore. I wanna see Tom do it! XD!

That's why Connor is so cute! XD!

Jeff sings to his dog...cute. Creepy, but cute!

...WOOT! XD! Oh yeah, Tom's the man!

And Mark is pissed, XP!

PATRICK! XD! I dun care! He's cool! XD! The dude knocked JAMES unconcious for fuck's sake! XD!


See? He's so COMPOSED when they walk into the if he were doing NOTHING at all...WIN.

Shua...Mark found James!

WHATAH! XD! Now the fun starts!
NeroAnne chapter 1 . 12/7/2009

Dammit! Why didn't I get an alert for this! You're on my list! *kills computer*


BRILLIANT XD! Love how the little "family" is gonna come back together! XP!


AWE! XP! See, I can never tell anymore...Whose the fucking hottest! I'm starting to lean more towards Tom, XD! He just has that whole nonchalant gimmick, XD! It wins.

Joseph! XD!

...Alright, new dude, XP! Me likey!

...Oh COOL! XD! I like Patrick!

Oh, the avenger! XD! I LOVE IT!

Now I'm REALLY pissed this was never alerted to me...

Must read more!
BellaHickenbottom chapter 21 . 12/4/2009
OMG! Yall had better have a sequel up by the end of the effing weekend! WHERE IS TOM? He needs to sit down with Cooper and Jeff so they can figure all of this shit out, not run away like a pansy! DAMN THEM ALL! p.s. proud of Mark being kinda fatherly like towards Cooper!
dehlia666 chapter 21 . 12/2/2009
WTF? Did you just have Tommy shoot himself?

What are you doing, Riky?

You got some 'splainin to do!
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