|Reviews for Fate & Forgotten Secrets: Outtakes|
| mommymac0508 chapter 6 . 12/15/2010
Hello I loved it it helps to have a better understanding update soon
| twlighttina chapter 6 . 12/15/2010
| ECis4Me chapter 6 . 12/15/2010
"Well, you clearly figured wrong. I explicitly said don't touch my brother, don't proposition my brother. No fucking, sucking, jerking, stroking, licking, riding, straddling, kissing, biting, pinching, my brother! If he comes on to you, walk away. I remember saying he was not even available to roll around in your fantasies. And that if I ever found out about these rules being broken, there was going to be a huge problem."
| Maplestyle chapter 6 . 12/15/2010
Oh Snshyne! How I've missed you...and bitchy Rosalie! Thanks so much for posting this! I would get down on my knees and beg for an outtake of what happens at Roma..but that would be greedy! Hope things are okay and that you have a fantastic holiday season!
| Kyuketsuki In Oki chapter 6 . 12/15/2010
Damn. Rosalie is one fierce b*tch. And to think that she didn't really like Bella all that much at the beginning but is now, kinda, sticking up for her.
| Erikajo chapter 5 . 8/3/2010
More Italian, please ;)
| nupuroo chapter 5 . 7/24/2010
What was that Edward was saying to himself about his Nonna? An apology of some sort, obviously, but what does it translate to?
| D Pattinson chapter 5 . 7/24/2010
I'm so behind, so this won't be a long reveiw. (Sorry, BB!)
I loved the outtake. Edward cracks me up. He is so irrational sometimes (not that making meatballs the wrong way is rational, or anything, but you know) and when he starts spewing his Italian, well, again you know what that does to me. LOL. So, now if only he could get his head completely out of his ass and focus on what Bella is trying to tell him, we'd be okay. "Oh, God Edward, Don't stop" does not sound like Stop! in my mind. In fact it sounds like the opposite. And frankly, I have to give Bella some credit here that she does as good of a job as she does in trying to let it go. She's obviously hurt about it, but she sure as hell puts up a good fight in making it look like she's okay.
And yes, Edward, you "probably should have just let that fucking shit on the bench play out". Smarter words have never been uttered.
I promise you, I'm going to get to the other chapters as soon as I can. I hope you don't mind the less than stellar review that this is, But at this point I figured it was better to just get something done rather than nothing.
| PhoenixMP3 chapter 5 . 7/22/2010
lol I was wondering what happen to this outtake
Its soo much fun to see Edward go all fussy over meatballs hahahahah
They are so cute together a little fucked up still at this stage but really cute :)
| shecater chapter 5 . 7/21/2010
Well, he's VERY serious bout his meatballs. LOL
| shecater chapter 4 . 7/21/2010
Great to know what makes he do what she does. :)
| shecater chapter 3 . 7/21/2010
I was kind of hesitant on reading this asshole's POV, but once I did I think it adds to the perspective of the story. HE IS ONE SICK MOTHER FUCKER!
| shecater chapter 2 . 7/21/2010
Another very important piece to the main story! Love how it was in both Alice & Jasper's POV.
| shecater chapter 1 . 7/21/2010
I'm so glad you posted this. I was wondering how they finally came about getting together.
| Cullenary chapter 5 . 7/21/2010
God I love this story! And this was PRICELESS-he is so funny! Like I have announced on a regualar basis on my FB page-he's one of my all time favorite Edwards in ff! Love you baby! Thanks for writing!xoxoxooxoxoxoxoxoxxo