Omg edolas chapter

I hope they kiss

Love these Chapters! Keep Posting Tho! :)

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duuude! why did you stop? it's a good story :( :( :(

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HAGAHAGHAJHAHHAHGGAHGAGHAHGAGAHGAHGAG!

It's Gajeel, not gazille

So far I'm loving this story. I usually wait until the last chapter to post a review, but I've decided to stray away from my usual MO. See, I usually read other fanfictions in order to gain inspiration for my own stories of similar "worlds" (Halo, Fairy Tail, ext.) and I must say that I am quite impressed with this story so far.
I read your previous story as well, and as I type this I realize that I forgot to leave a review for it because I was looking so very much forward to this story. (I'll review it after I'm done with this one) Every chapter that I started, I found myself wanting Natsu to just GET WITH THE PROGRAM already, which compelled me to read on to see if he finally got it. Now, left with a cliffhanger of sorts, I stand on the precipice of enlightenment. (Or something philosophical like that)
I do hope you update soon, as this story has literally taken a hammer to my writers block and curb stomped it. Not only that, but it is one of the only Fairy Tail stories I've found with GOOD GRAMMAR. Seriously, you have no idea how rare that is! Anyway, great job with the story. I hope to see it continue.

I loved Lucy's response to that bitchy repoted! Asexual! That is brilliant hahaha, Lucy is so sassy...

This is written really well. It's not ooc for anyone either so I hope there's more chapters to come :)

So cute cant wait to read the rest

Not the feels... THE FEEELS!

You should definitely add some cover art (might make the story more popular).