Reviews for Don't You Wanna Take a Ride with Me?
chatterbox33 chapter 17 . 12/26/2011
...mmmmmmm... chocolate -flavored Edward :) I hope he gets a break and soon.
twilight1972 chapter 17 . 12/22/2011
Best Christmas prezzie ever - you're back!

Loved the chapter...damn Rose and cell phones!
Fliberty chapter 17 . 12/16/2011
So close! When will she ever tell him how she really feels?

What the hell is going is going on with Rose...

Loved Charlie in this one :-)
Kelly J chapter 17 . 12/15/2011
they need to just get it on already! the UST is stifling! you would have to use a saw to cut through it! not a knife, a SAW!

i cant wait for the next chapteR!
grabadietcoke chapter 17 . 12/15/2011
I love what Charlie said to her, how he can see what she might need as his daughter, the push, the words. Really lovely.

Poor Mike Newton - I like how you wrote him, not terrible, but not wonderful. Interested (because she's worth being interested in).
Narci9237 chapter 17 . 12/15/2011
Finally, god I can't wait until Bella admits her feelings, so that Edward can unleash himself on her too. I don't like Rose at the moment for interupting Bella's spur of guts of honesty. I still don't know how she was able to hold off of Edward for so long but Thank you Charlie for opening her eyes to reality. I love love Charlie... Nice tease ther at the end and cliffy by the way;) (I want some chocolate covered Edward, Yummm.) Thank you again for another AMAZING Chapter. HAPPY HOLIDAYS!
twilover76 chapter 17 . 12/14/2011
I liked the Charlie dialogue. He's a good dad.

Looks like Bella is about to grab the horns (finally!) ;) How she was able to deny herself that man for so long is beyond me!

Loved the update (missing your gropes!)
Grrlnorth chapter 17 . 12/14/2011
Oh dear God, you're such a tease! :) In the very best way, of course. That was some seriously hot sexual tension going on there in that restaurant. And I loved the conversation with Charlie.
EMCxo chapter 17 . 12/12/2011
What the what? Chocolate covered Edward kissing and then mothereffing Rose cockblocks the end of the chapter? I am totally picturing BD ManRose closing the door on Sadward's face in the bathroom scene btw.


Glad to see you update bb.

I flove Charlie.


i.luv.twilight2 chapter 17 . 12/12/2011
What an awesome story! My favorite part thus far was Edward's dream of being a fried boyfriend. I'm guessing Rose is freaking out because she's pregnant with Em's kid? Great story!
BLilTXgirl chapter 17 . 12/12/2011
Dammit, Rose! If you interrupted that conversation because you're having a crisis of your lesbian identity after meeting Emmett you're gonna be in big trouble!
shaz308 chapter 17 . 12/12/2011
Interesting turn of events. Look forward to your next update, thanks.
claireoth chapter 17 . 12/11/2011
Go Charlie! You tell her!

Come on Bella spit it out!


jennybelle chapter 17 . 12/10/2011
Loved it! And I love your Edward. How perfect is he?
ECis4Me chapter 17 . 12/10/2011
Hiiii! Fun chapter. LOVED their playfulness with Mike. I also love your Charlie! :-)

xoxoxo Tyra
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