|Reviews for Don't You Wanna Take a Ride with Me?|
| Fliberty chapter 16 . 11/20/2011
Yes! More Jake action, you didn't disappoint.
That was pretty funny stuff ( particularly Edward head butting the fish tank!) I'd love to hear Charlie's POV of that incident!
The situation with Mike should be good too :-)
| Fliberty chapter 15 . 11/20/2011
Jake is an angry fish? Priceless!
Edward was so funny showing the fish who is boss. How did Bella resist the urge to Record that one way conversation for YouTube?
| ryuki77 chapter 16 . 11/14/2011
Oooh...this bodes well for Edward, no?
| enamoramiento chapter 16 . 11/14/2011
DAMN! I successfully ignored the fact that this story ist work in progress, right until my "next"-click lead into space...
*grabs Twinkies and settles in the pantry to wait*
| enamoramiento chapter 15 . 11/13/2011
BEST. JAKE. EVER.
| enamoramiento chapter 13 . 11/13/2011
Te-he. Loved the shots, reading felt like getting trashed myself...
| enamoramiento chapter 11 . 11/13/2011
Ooooh, Salsa... very subtle, Edward *snort*
| enamoramiento chapter 8 . 11/13/2011
Huh. Didnt see that coming... Im not sure whether to shake her or her hand (in gratulations) :o)
| enamoramiento chapter 7 . 11/13/2011
Oh-o... I like that she is straight and stern with him, though I wonder what shell have to say...
| enamoramiento chapter 6 . 11/12/2011
Oh-oh. Nothing good ever came from the Heidis...
| Be-Light-ed chapter 16 . 11/3/2011
Literally stayed up all night to finish this with 9 am jury duty looming this morning bc it's just that hilarious. Jake the fish takes the absolute characterization for the alpha wolf. I adore it all, every word and plotline point. It's a joy to read though I wish I could say the same for dealing with my zombie state from lack of sleep. Only one life, so live big, right? Can't wait to read more.
| ICanFeel361 chapter 16 . 11/2/2011
Hope edward gives it to mike good! Can't wait for more.
| twilover76 chapter 16 . 11/1/2011
I think the fish might be winning in the Battle of Edward and Jake. The trout has Edward all kinds of discombobulated. hehehe ;)
I'm insanely curious as to what Carlisle said to Charlie over the phone. Can't wait to see these two get together.
Bella is one stubborn girl. Holy Panty Lockdown Batman. I don't know how she's doing it.
I hope Edward puts a beatdown on Newton. I can't stand that assclown.
Thanks for such a great story, sweetness! Looking forward to the next update.
| twilover76 chapter 15 . 11/1/2011
LOLOLOL Jake! You had me rolling with the head-butts and Edward prancing around in mockery.
Charlie is good people. He's definitely Team E.
I think Bella is going to get with the program soon.
| twilover76 chapter 14 . 10/31/2011
BWHAHAHAHAHA...HBJ was a little over-eager there. It's probably good that Bella isn't going to remember the jizz-in-the-pants episode. Pancho is just causing all sorts of problems for poor Edward. I'm starting to feel bad for the guy ;)
Em is totally getting down in a threesome! I think Rose is going to toss Tanya out on her derriere and downsize the party number.
Holy hell woman, that bar kiss was hot. Sign me up for one of those please. I'm going to have good dreams tonight ;)