Reviews for Don't You Wanna Take a Ride with Me?
Savannah chapter 8 . 11/29/2014
I think you could totally pass this off as T! You should try it!
Savannah chapter 7 . 11/28/2014
Coco Puffs are awesome! I'm actually eating some right now!
Savannah chapter 6 . 11/28/2014
Definitely wanting to do naughty things! Thanks!
Savannah chapter 5 . 11/28/2014
Awesome chapter! You shoul do one with Emmett and Bella fucking! That would be awesome.
crazymama chapter 8 . 11/24/2014
I'm enjoying this story. That last chapter was so heart-breaking! Oddly, I was listening to a song while reading that seemed so perfect. You must listen! It's a song titled 1965 by Zella Day. It starts with, "You saw me spinning from the corner of your eye..." And the chorus says, "Can we go back to the world we had? With a love so sweet it makes me sad... it's the world we've been dreaming of... cut like diamonds we were made to last..." She further says, "I felt forever when I laid upon your chest..." but then she repeats over and over, "I don't belong here." I swear this song was written for this Edward and Bella...
MEXKAROLA chapter 18 . 11/23/2014
What... That it you stopped it there? Are you gonna finish the story. Please tell me you are going to finish the story. You can't just tell us that that Bree call and leave us hanging!
MrsASkarsgard chapter 8 . 11/4/2014
I could not stop crying when Bella had to tell him that she could only be friends. Your writing makes everything seems so real and emotional. I can totally identify with this kind of Bella. This is a great story. I have not been able to stop reading this. I look forward to reading more of your writings.
bre chapter 4 . 10/4/2014
Chilvery isn't dead it just went to wherever lady like went to.:)
MAD-GAMERS07 chapter 17 . 9/17/2014
please update! :)
XxYourSilentScreamsxX chapter 18 . 9/14/2014
IM AM ADOPTING THIS! Y CANT PEEPLE FINISH THERE STORIES?
MAD-GAMERS07 chapter 18 . 7/25/2014
Love this story
amyjo511 chapter 18 . 6/29/2014
Please finish this. It's a fantastic story
tanseynz chapter 18 . 6/18/2014
Awww and yet another female for Bella to get hysterical about, and blame Edward yet again for having a life before her. Frankly, with the automatic and vitriolic hate she has going for any female between fifteen and thirty five who even walks by Edward in the street, you have to wonder how she functions outside the padded cell.
You have a great character buildup there, so I hope you have an equally great downfall for her, plus your Edward starts to regain his self respect again. An equal relationship like Angela & Ben would be lovely to see.
tanseynz chapter 17 . 6/18/2014
Giving the hairy eyeball to any female that looks at him and reinventing him as a boyfriend to score off an old boyfriend? That's not invincibility, that's immaturity with a side order of unearned ego.
And still he lets her carry his balls in her handbag...
tanseynz chapter 13 . 6/18/2014
Victoria has Bella down to a T! Bella's all about playing games while pretending to be hard done by when it comes to Edward. One of her friends should call her bluff and set Edward up with a real date. I mean to so, they're only friends, right? Friends can date other people - in fact, they generally do...
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