Reviews for The Alliance
miku.loverz chapter 1 . 7/3/2015
I think it's rushed. There's some grammar mistake, but not a lot. I give it 6 out of 10.
Aquary chapter 1 . 4/2/2015
. interesting, a bit steamy story...
thank you.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/11/2014
Could you do a sequal.
Apollo chapter 1 . 6/26/2014
Sequel, Sequel, SEQUEL! Make one now! Maybe their wedding night!
Rhemarine chapter 1 . 6/9/2014
Not bad. :D
You gots a thumbs up.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/29/2014
batmanfan00 chapter 1 . 7/23/2013
It's a good story but I just cant see legolas as being anything other than a gentleman with the woman he loves. I have to admit I think that I liked your portrayal of him in your other stories a lot better. He was more like the true character than this adaptation. Still good story.
violet rose chapter 1 . 4/5/2013
why is legolas such a pervert in this fic?
sophie29 chapter 1 . 3/31/2013
i can't believe this is just oneshot.. you should write a sequel.
oh please write more susanxlegolas fic! _
claire-loves-music chapter 1 . 12/25/2012
So...any plans on updating? This is a really good crossover.
Gabrielle607 chapter 1 . 11/13/2012

Even though this made me hate Legolas a bit, I still love it!
DamonSalvatoresLover chapter 1 . 10/7/2012
i would love it if this could turn into a story?
AnonymousYouth chapter 1 . 7/29/2012
great! :) but Haldir isn't from Mirkwood he's from Lothlorien therefore Legolas is not his king... But other than that the story was AH-MAZING! :) fabulous!
The Unofficial Kill Joy chapter 1 . 2/18/2012
"ministrations: plural of min·is·tra·tion (Noun)

The provision of assistance.

The services of a minister of religion”

I'm sorry. It always peeves me when I see this word misused in fanfiction.

I apologize if I come off as rude, but I just wanted to let you be aware for future reference. I also wanted to mention that this was a very well written one-shot. Definitely a darker side of Legolas that we normally don't see.

Happy future writings!
Toshia chapter 1 . 11/5/2011
Aw man! I wish this wasn't a one-shot!
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