|Reviews for Devotionals|
| Rachel Garber chapter 2 . 6/1/2013
This was such a hot outtake, really really love this a lot, read it long ago, but want a little "taste" of Brotherly Devotion and I will take what I can get, where I can get it, it is a great story, well developed characters, as well as story as a whole. These two belong together. Edward has never felt a real part of his family, they just don't get him and it is obvious that Emmett is his father's favorite. Even Esme seems to poo poo not just his interests, but Bella's as well. They "get" each other as no one else does. Okay, yeah I know about the whole cheating thing, but it seems to me that Emmett has brought that on himself. He never made an effort to really understand is wife, he showers her with expensive gifts which she has no interest in, then he belittles her career choice because, heaven forbid, she would rather teach kids in a public school, than a bunch of spoiled rich kids in a private school. He is also always too tired for sex, and pretty much ignores his wife, spending more time with one of his employees (forget what she was to him) than with his own wife.
| Rachel Garber chapter 1 . 6/1/2013
I started reading Brotherly Devotion quite a while ago, and really loved it. I waited for updates, then noticed that it disappeared. I found it later on that wordpress or other site, forget what it is called. However, I managed to lock myself out of that site. I think I had a dif email, or password, whatever it was, I am no longer able to access that site. Is there anyway I can get the link for that. I have a group, May 13, 1986 or if this works, my email is now, I just thought that was such a great story. I was one of the readers who was in favor of the breakup of B and Emmett's relationship for many reasons, not the least of which was him not paying attention to her, not understanding her, giving her that expensive bracelet, instead of what she really wanted, and belittling her desire to work with kids who really needed her. She was Edward's only support as well, in a family that is more concerned with material possessions, having the "right" job, instead of the one that you love. Thank you.
| eyeonrob chapter 2 . 12/3/2011
Public bathroom sex with a hard,horny, gorgeous 22 year old?
Well, HELL yeah...
Hot, hot, hot...PLEASE do some more outtakes from EPOV...
Sooooooo good! Thanks for sharing your talent.
| Onward chapter 2 . 4/16/2011
Wow...so glad you've continued this story!
Thx for the outtakes!
| Annie Larsson chapter 2 . 12/29/2010
Awesome outtakes! :D You write really awesome stuff :)
| fcat5761 chapter 2 . 11/20/2010
Whew! Love this story. These outtakes are hot!
| twilightobession chapter 2 . 10/10/2010
In the bathroom at the coffee shop. WOW!
| twilightobession chapter 1 . 10/10/2010
WOW! That was wonderful. Hot and sexy. Great job.
| 2old4fanfic chapter 2 . 5/3/2010
this is not what I think about when I stop for a cup of coffee, but I will now...
| 2old4fanfic chapter 1 . 5/3/2010
I'd like to pack Edward along for my next picnic...
| karolkid chapter 2 . 5/3/2010
This was hot! Yum!
| moniquecullen chapter 2 . 4/30/2010
wow, i expected edward to be a little more remorseful about the affair. i mean i know he and em don't really get along but, damn,think of how carlisle and esme will take it also. is he really prepared to lose his whole family? i mean don't get me wrong, i still love him and i'd most definitely do him (lol)!
| sophie921 chapter 2 . 4/9/2010
I am totally devoted to your 'meager' offering...that was so hot!
| Nicffwhisperer chapter 2 . 4/6/2010
omg that was HOT. No one writes sex scenes like YOU ;)
| carebear309 chapter 2 . 4/6/2010
Damn these are hot! Can't wait for the next chapter :)