|Reviews for Finding Home|
| untrvldwrlds chapter 2 . 10/29/2009
Your writing is superb as always! I think I vaguely recall reading this before, but I'm glad you have re-posted it and have decided to continue with it. I will echo everyone else sentiments in that, yes this has been done before, but I'm positive you will put a new spin on it and I'm sure it will be outstanding! And I am very much looking forward to reading future chapters.
| apalusa-light chapter 2 . 10/29/2009
:O I remember this story from when you posted it before... are you going to keep going with it? I hope so, I always liked it. It may be a common story line, but it's a good one for them because Rory did want to be with Logan. She wanted to marry him. She just wasn't ready yet. Having her be pregnant means that she HAS to be ready for her life to change and because of the way she grew up (with Lorelai, and with Chris flitting in and out of the picture), she wouldn't want her child to live in the same circumstances. Not if she could help it. The stuggle with this story line isn't so much with them having to deal with her pregnancy, it's with them having to deal with each other after they've broken each other's hearts. Good luck and I do hope to see more!
| Miss Sunshine15 chapter 2 . 10/29/2009
I really liked how you started this fic the first time you posted it so im really glad you are re-posting and continuing with it.
Yeah Rory finding out she is pregnant after turning Logan down has been done a thousand times over but with the quality and style of your writing im sure you can make it an original stroy.
Looking forward to the next chapter when they met and Rory tells Logan the news.
| Curley-Q chapter 2 . 10/29/2009
Wow, great job with this chapter! I cannot wait to see their meeting! Please continue soon!
| nali0403 chapter 2 . 10/29/2009
i kinda like where this story is going. yes it's ben done before, but different authors have different takes...i hope it works out though, and is sweet, and i can't wait for the banter!
| AnnieM55 chapter 2 . 10/29/2009
I can't wait for more of this story. It's gripping already! I hope they works things out (hint, hint?) these two are just meant to be. Logan and Fatherhood? I can see that. Rory and Motherhood? That works too! Logan and pregnant Rory? Poor Logan! I bet that would be a interesting ride!
| sicklittlesuicide chapter 2 . 10/28/2009
I can't wait to read more.
| ms chapter 2 . 10/28/2009
edge of my seat! update soon
| Juzzy88 chapter 2 . 10/28/2009
| KRiSTiNEDAHLiNG chapter 2 . 10/28/2009
amazing, but then again i'd expect nothing less from someone as talented as you. i eagerly look forward to finding out logan's reaction to the big news.
| Anon chapter 2 . 10/28/2009
This storyline may have been done before but I must say that out of the many I have read that use it this is one of the best. The alternating POVs is a technique that can either grant the reader a more complete understanding of the character interactions or it can result in a disjointed jumble. You have managed the former expertly adding tension and empathy equally.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
| PhoebeTheQueenOfDragons chapter 2 . 10/28/2009
| bear67 chapter 2 . 10/28/2009
ok im hooked. dont leave me hanging
| blameamy chapter 1 . 10/28/2009
oh i like this story. Please update soon
| lus chapter 1 . 10/28/2009
well written, can't wait to read more so, don't make me wait 2 much