|Reviews for First Time's The Charm|
| Fi Suki Saki chapter 1 . 7/12/2014
Oohh... that was nice... :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/14/2013
Adorable so cute I love it!
| Lizzybear54 chapter 1 . 7/14/2012
Loved it! XD
| cooloh10 chapter 1 . 6/2/2012
Wow! That was the best USUK story... ever. The details were just so amazing; you captured EVERY detail. :D
| pennilee chapter 1 . 12/4/2011
So sweet! (:
| animeloveramy chapter 1 . 11/4/2011
i love this. its so cute and well written. definately preferable to doing work ;D
love it _
| England's Porn Box chapter 1 . 3/13/2011
To be perfectly honest...
this is one of the best USxUK fics I have ever read.
There was so much detail, emotion, and just overall awesomeness!
The kiss was so amazing; the detail blew me away. You're a wonderful writer!
| FenrirKeyblade chapter 1 . 8/14/2010
I feel like I've died, gone to UKxUS heaven, then got sent back here again to fully enjoy the awesomeness.
Oh snap :'D
And when England asked America if he wanted to again even though America obviously did, I was stuck between going 'awwww' and 'Goddamnit just kiss already' even though that's what made the kiss special.
Along with America's awkwardness/newness. Which was win.
Oh, plus the '18 and a half' bits. Adorable.
Fanfictions like this make me feel okay about having UKxUS as my OTP. (I'm still a little ashamed of liking it because of the brotherly stuff. I've never felt guiltly for liking a pairing before D: I'm not even ashamed of reading PrussiaGermany, WTF is wrong with me on every level?)
America at the end made me lol
(England disapproves of the poor, poor English on the internetz.)
| brokenpassions chapter 1 . 5/29/2010
I loved the awkwardness. America being all, I hope I'm doing this right.
| thehappystalkerball chapter 1 . 4/23/2010
Aw, that was too cute. I liked the lead up to it and how America made a clear invitation with the kissing the palm thing and how England kept re-checking just to make sure. Haha, I'm sure England didn't want it to end there. ;D Anyway, lovely writing and loved the description of the kiss.
| VanillaSlash chapter 1 . 4/12/2010
The delemas on America and (especially) England's parts were terribly cute! I loved how America kept repeating that he was 18 and a half. Definitely an invitation! o- But how sweet was that kiss? Very, that's how sweet! Great job! Love it! -
| kakkujapojat chapter 1 . 3/28/2010
w your us/uk fics are so cute as well;;
this was absolutely adorable :D
| JAFootnote chapter 1 . 3/17/2010
Me: America how eager of you.
America: What it was my first kiss!
Me: Well I liked this. Aw I always like to see an innocent America. It's refreshing in a sense.
| Straight-Jacket-Included chapter 1 . 2/20/2010
Nawr... that was soo good!
You wrote that really well.
You should do a France x UK one, please?
| xXLunarEclipse896Xx chapter 1 . 2/17/2010
I could definitely picture Alfred's action at the end, and it was hilarious! This was ever so cute...