Reviews for Cedarstar's Secret
Fb-PHE13 chapter 12 . 5/27/2012
Great job!
WyldClaw chapter 4 . 2/26/2012
it looks like cedarpaw is forgeting how rude bramblepaw was at first
Rottedheart of the River chapter 12 . 1/7/2012
This is pretty good lol I love the cedar and bramble pairing I am also sad she died :(. I'm glad he is happy with Crowtail cause I could see as soon as he became an apprentice she had the hots for cedar. It isn't odd for a cat to have six kits cause my cat had ten kits the one time but she had died giving birth :(

I plan to read the sequel!
WyldClaw chapter 5 . 9/3/2011
WyldClaw chapter 3 . 9/3/2011
wow! so troutclaw originally was clan leader? uh oh it looks like cedarpaw has fallen head over tail in love with bramblepaw at first sight

Why were Nightstar and brackenfoot so rude to hollypaw and cedarpaw on there first day as apprentices?
Random Fandom chapter 12 . 7/26/2011
First of all,I'd like 2 say it has not been 20 years,but only 1 and *checks computer's calendar*and 5 days. Shoot,I've should've found this on the 21st and be exactly the 1 year anniversary. M

Anywho,really enjoyed the story and am about to go read the sequel even though it's *checks computer's clock* 11:26 PM.

So, adios amiga/o! X3
WyldClaw chapter 2 . 7/19/2011
i bet cedarpaw is dissapointed that he didn't get his uncle (brackenfoot) as a mentor
Osprey17 and Mossheart13 chapter 2 . 7/10/2011
Nice! I love the way it starts. :)
Lifepaw chapter 12 . 7/3/2011
Great story and Nightstar being not a leader is great, since she is not STARCLAN, but DARK FOREST material.
Mothstar chapter 12 . 5/30/2011
I like this one! I can't wait to read the sequel!

I give it 3.5 out of 5 stars! :D :D

Rainstar of ShadowClan chapter 1 . 7/10/2010
That's a really tiny Clan O_o
dragongabi chapter 11 . 7/1/2010
there are a few things wrong with story. for example, littlecloud was born when brokenstar was leader, the only reason littlecloud became medicine cat was because cinderpelt healed him when he was sick from crowfood. Also, littleclouds so little because brokenstar made him an apprentice when he was only 3 moons old. Duh!
DementedEvilNinjaFishies-Lacey chapter 12 . 6/21/2010
I don't mind that you forgot Yellowfang! This was a great story and I'll miss it, but hopefully you'll do a story on Russetfur's life. I absolutely adored this, so don't listen to any flames you get! They have no idea what they're talking about! XD

Kitty-Guardian Dorothy chapter 11 . 6/19/2010
What did the twoleg do to him? Keep or kill him?
DementedEvilNinjaFishies-Lacey chapter 11 . 6/19/2010
I don't think that was unrealistic; my cat had 6 kittens.

Poor Cedarstar! This was one of my favorite chapters; I loved all the kits, but why do you hate Rowanclaw? He's not my favorite, but I think he's fine, except I was weirded out when it said he was a she-cat and then it said he was a tom. 0_o

Russetkit was awesomeness even as a kit, and even more so when she became a warrior/ deputy! *sobs* I can't believe the Erins killed her! You should totally make her story a sequel!

I didn't think Runningnose was mean in the books, but whatever, I don't care...


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