Reviews for Whatever Love Brings
juli123 chapter 14 . 3/27/2014
Can't wait the next chapter, I hope you update it soon
Yukia chapter 1 . 1/5/2014
you should read this author's fanfiction in this site about vampire knight it is so amazing and you will get great ideas if you read /his profile name is nur misurr and the stories you should read are
PAINTED VEIL
ECHELON
KING AND CONSORT
well i hope you write again!
YUKIA chapter 14 . 1/5/2014
how about something like kaname sees yuuki in the cellars with blood all over and emotionless eyes and yuri escaping when she goes in a big rage and her powers go outta control and something like yuuki turning evil and under ridos spell or something and starts killing alot of people?
i suggest something along those lines

YUKIA
Black Kitty Knight Club chapter 14 . 2/11/2012
I really love this story. I can't wait for the next chapter.
fanfic angelfairy chapter 1 . 7/8/2011
ooohhhhh! I hope someone doesn't die in this story.
Scattered Kaleidoscope chapter 12 . 5/22/2011
I protest against this story! D8 It made me cry!
animefreakshow chapter 14 . 11/30/2010
I think you should make the next chapter about kaname saving yuuki and yuri. :)
animefreakshow chapter 7 . 11/29/2010
You kind of copied breaking dawn in this chapter, and you need a little improvement on your grammar and spelling. Please know this is a critique, not a flame.
KanamexYuukiLover chapter 14 . 11/8/2010
1. You can say Yuri has some type of powers to come save her parents, because she wanted to see her Mommy and Daddy.

2. You can write about Yuri, like what she is doing or thinking.

I was thinking of making Yuri upset or sad, because her parents aren't there with her, and she don't know where she is.
Primrose7 chapter 14 . 11/8/2010
I think it will be the best if Kaname escapes, kills Sara and saves Yuuki as well. And a happy end:)
Angelus Draco chapter 14 . 11/7/2010
I think something along the lines of Kananme performing some sort of retribution would be good.

:)

Just do what you think's best.

:)
xCiciNx chapter 14 . 11/7/2010
I think you should do a chapter where the others are finding a way to save the Kurans!

Well I hope you find an idea soon!
KitsuneSenpai18 chapter 13 . 11/7/2010
loves it keep it please
xCiciNx chapter 13 . 11/6/2010
I LUV YOUR STORY!

Its really intense!

Fabulous job! : )

Although its really depressing about what's happening to the Kurans!

I hope this story has a good ending!

For the next chapter I think you should do #2 (the other vampire's children)

Anyways great job and please update soon!
xCiciNx chapter 13 . 11/6/2010
I LUV YOUR STORY!

Its really intense!

Fabulous job! : )

Although its really depressing about what's happening to the Kurans!

I hope this story has a good ending!

For the next chapter I think you should do #2 (the other vampire's children)

Anyways great job and please update soon!
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