Ok this is my second read through of this story and while I know it's not a major person or anything I love how the first costume from Max that she recognizes as his is the Goddess Bastet.

I absolutely loved it!. I really enjoyed the bit of magic and legend in this fic. I really loved all of your fic of In plain sight.
And your citrus scenes too, ha ha. I wish I had a Max, too!, He'd be very helpful and I love the beautiful clothes and the details that you described.

He leído que muchos autores se emocionan cuando les llega un review en español, creo que sienten que han traspasado fronteras, je je. Aunque mi dominio del inglés no sea perfecto, trato de dejar unos pocos comentarios. Si lo hiciera en español escribiría mucho más, como ya lo puedes notar n_n
Es impresionante cuando los autores se esfuerzan en investigar sobre algún tema y compartir conocimientos. Me recuerda un poco a Marshall 3

Thank you for a great fic!

Wow! that was just fantastic!. I do LOVE myths and legends and this is just marvelous. I really don't know why you hadn't more reviews, seriously!
You're definitely one of my favorite writers. I love all of your fics!

P.S. Sorry for my bad English. I'm mexican, so...

Fantastic imagery! The description of The Morrgain Costume was breathtaking.

Wonderful story! Got a lot if lols out of me and not a few awww's. Your zest is spicy and delicious and I loved Max and his twists. Very much a page turner.

Awesome story. I really liked how you melded the old and the modern world together. The information you provided about the costumes and gods were so good I could picture them in my mind quite well. Thank you I really enjoyed reading your story.

This is the most amazing piece of erotica I have ever read

Awesome story! I thoroughly loved it! So like them to bet on anything and issue challenges!

I loved everything in it: the action, the suspense, the romance, the sex scenes... and the Egyptian mythology!

Great work and thank you!

I know you wrote this story ages ago, but seeing as I just found it, I have to comment on Mary's costume. Holy crap! Your description of the costume had my mouth watering for want of it. It sounds absolutely beautiful (something I would want to wear). Is there any chance you have an actual picture of what you described or was that all out of your head?

This is one of my favorite stories of all time!1 Love it!

Really enjoyed this story, thanks for sharing it!

Lol, maybe it's to much NCIS fic but I could almost see Abby and McGee in parts of this. There are a lot of similarities in those twos relationship to that of M&M don't you think?

Damn, that was hot. I'm amazed you actually made the awkward conversation work, god knows how many of those conversations are so ungodly awkward and cring-worthy to read. Nice job. Mad props to you. Can't wait to finish the story

I loved this story. It was well written and creative. I also loved the fact that you stayed true to the characters personalities from the show. I get writing in the AU, but I have read several fics where Mary turns into the gushy, sentimental sap the minute she and Marshall get together. While I agree with her opening up to him, I don't agree with a complete change of personality. Well written and congrats on the success of it.

Now that I've spent much of last night and all of this morning devouring your stories (especially this one), I really, really owe you a tremendous "Thank you!" review! You have a fabulous gift for writing and excellent insight into Mary & Marshall. I have ADORED reading your stories!

Some particular things I wanted to congratulate you on from this story: Max is a marvelous character, and I love how you introduced him. There was just enough mystery & foreshadowing to make him dramatic but not threatening. I think you wove the fantasy themes in very, very well, too - Everything rang completely true and believable. I loved the Red Death as the bad guy - very threatening, very true to the story's mythos, and he was appropriately difficult to conquer.

I loved the bet, the teasing, the interruptions (poor Mary & Marshall!), Stan & Eleanor's observations, and the final resolution. And the Morrigan costume made me drool & want to go make one, dang it! {grin} Mary as Morrigan is perfect, and now I need to go read about Thoth to understand how perfectly you matched him to Marshall.

This story is going into my favorites & will be read again & again & again. Thank you so much for creating it and sharing it!

Absolutely endearing.

Well done story that kept me up far too late many a night - the sign of an excellent tale.

Thank you.