Reviews for The Lummox Smile
The Mystic Doctor chapter 1 . 6/16/2010
That really makes you feel bad for Riki. I hadn't considered it, but one character's quest having to wait for another's to be finished does kind of make sense, if they're all happening at once. Too bad Fuse's effort at cheering Riki up was long since wasted...Nevertheless, this is a very good story.
Keeper of Fatestones chapter 1 . 11/20/2009
-grin- You started the SaGa Frontier Forum too, didn't you?

I like this story. It's sad, and gives you a real feel for what Riki must be going through. Good Job, Jetice

-Keeper of Fatestones-

-Shard of Riki-