Reviews for Sometime Around Midnight
mckenzie13 chapter 1 . 5/30/2012
This was the graetest story I ever read!
JanetStroke16 chapter 1 . 5/15/2012
oh! I really like it! thanks for this! a hug from Mexico. keep writing
queenm764 chapter 1 . 3/28/2012
in my story im writing freddie and sam find new people... but r they still happy? read 2 find out
miscellaneousmystery chapter 1 . 3/15/2012
That was cute, in a way, heee' (:
01110011100001111 chapter 1 . 7/31/2011
I actually really liked the way you wrote this. It wasn't confusing at all and it provided a lot of additional tension to the situation, especially towards the later sections, when Freddie can't even complete an entire thought without being barraged by memories.

I liked his character here, cause I've read too many versions of him that portray him as a guy who can be incredibly romantic and sensitive, without ever once sacrificing his masculinity in the process. That can work I guess, but it's not very realistic. Here you have him capable of collapsing into a pitiful sobbing fit. I thought that was the best part of the one-shot really, cause we all know that feeling - where you try to hold back your meltdown because you don't want others to see it, but it becomes impossible to do after a certain point.

The ending here might seem too happy I guess, but anyone who's gone through this knows it takes forever to truly get past it, lol, so it's easy for me to see future complications for Sam and Freddie. At any rate, they both seem like the sort of people who're too stubborn to just give up, so it rang true on that level.

Also, I like that you're not scared to throw a few jokes in even though it's an angsty situation. Haha... some of Freddie's thoughts killed me, and when he screamed at the wrong car I laughed.

It was a great story, well-rounded emotionally, and really enjoyable to read through.
Jaade123 chapter 1 . 4/23/2011
I love this so so much!

Aw, so sad though!

But amazing!:D
AlwaysTheToneOfSurprise7 chapter 1 . 1/27/2011

Story added to Favorite Stories list.

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Coyote Laughs chapter 1 . 9/10/2010
First off: great song choice...

Second off: great, great writing... I do really like your style of writing... generally, not a big fan of first person, but you pulled it off very well...

Third off: I will have to agree with another of your reviewers that 95% of the stuff on FanFic generally tends to be rubbish in regard to grammar and punctuation, but your work did not which makes it oh so much easier to read... bravo to you...

Fourth off: You wrote Freddie's guilt very well... and the reasoning why he took so long, ouch... it was spot on...

Fifth: We all love happy endings, but this song, in my opinion, screams for a sad ending. But I am glad she gave him a second chance...

Sixth: You've developed Freddie very well... you've made him a viable character, with his past (iCarly) influencing him in his present... I like it very much...

Seventh: You got the price of the shot right... *laughs*

Enjoyed this work, and looking forward to reading more of your stuff...
Pixaria chapter 1 . 6/13/2010
This is better to read then the M rated stories for Codename: Kids Next Door. Trust me it takes alot for me to say that. Keep up the awsome Fan Fiction writin'!
MollyDublin chapter 1 . 5/19/2010
This story was a very pleasant surprise. A sort of, Diamond in the ruff, if you will. is not well known for it's well written, thought out and intelligent stories. I'm incredibly impressed and I truly enjoyed reading this. I look forward to reading more of your work.
aussiemma chapter 1 . 4/5/2010
this was brilliant! love love love love loved it 3
xNomii chapter 1 . 4/2/2010
I really liked it,

it was beautiful
Kikyz chapter 1 . 3/5/2010
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blackanimecat chapter 1 . 12/7/2009
anxt...anxt...anxt...anxt...anxt...smut...anxt...anxt...anxt...anxt...anxt...anxt...anxt...forgivness...fluff...happy ending
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