|Reviews for The Slap|
| mounds01 chapter 20 . 11/15
This is a very good story. Great job!
| Aggie94 chapter 20 . 10/22
Great twist. Enjoyed all of it. Thanks for sharing your words
| M1A chapter 2 . 3/5
Paul Lorimar? not Lahote?Oo
| mfedwards7 chapter 20 . 11/11/2016
That ending is so cute and cheesy.
| Guest chapter 13 . 8/28/2016
| Tilty.bbb chapter 20 . 6/3/2016
This was a great read. Nice job
| Emjezz chapter 9 . 3/13/2016
I loved you story so far but the threesome ... I generally don't habe anything against them but I dislike them in imprint stories. It's obviously your decision as the author and as I said your writing is good! I know you tried to be considerate of the possibility of readerd not liking the treesome by publishing the lemon seperately but, at least for me, that still didn't change the fact that I KNEW they had it .
It makes me really sad because I loved your story so far but I won't continue reading this, I'm sorry.
I will check out your other stories though (should you have any).
| rrochelle465 chapter 20 . 1/23/2016
Yay things are great bella and paul Is maried and the family is complete... This was a great story I am sad to see it end good Job...
| rrochelle465 chapter 19 . 1/23/2016
Wow it's time...
| rrochelle465 chapter 18 . 1/23/2016
Aww poor bells she is so sad her gift has left...hmmm I wonder if it was on a time limit?
| rrochelle465 chapter 17 . 1/23/2016
Wow way to spoil a a good day I hope everyone is ready...
| rrochelle465 chapter 16 . 1/22/2016
Poor bella she has so much going on can you blame her for be so stressed out...I hope she will take some time to relax she a has a great family...I hope this battle is over soon...I can't wait to see the arrival of the newest member of the family...
| rrochelle465 chapter 15 . 1/22/2016
Awww what a great surprise Go bella and paul...
| rrochelle465 chapter 14 . 1/22/2016
Wow what a cliff hanger what is wrong with bella?
| rrochelle465 chapter 13 . 1/22/2016
Wow things are about to change...hmmm I hope this meeting goes well...