Reviews for The Slap
New York Country chapter 2 . 4/1
Paul's last name is Lahote
lia warner chapter 7 . 12/14/2014
wolf
Inlovewithjazz chapter 20 . 11/23/2014
Great story, thanks.
gia warner chapter 7 . 10/25/2014
total threesome
the newest daughter chapter 1 . 9/29/2014
I always said they would be perfect together.
Gord chapter 20 . 9/11/2014
Read your whole story today from Chapter 1 to Chapter 20 great story excellent detail in the love an passion and I hope you will be able to make a living from your writing abilities. Thankyou for this arfternoon delight.
Gord chapter 18 . 9/11/2014
Wow can't stop reading these chapters.
Gord chapter 2 . 9/11/2014
Ah you are a Sexual woman and what a writer so Lusty.
Write another please.
Gord chapter 1 . 9/11/2014
You Kept me reading so will read on cause I am looking for the Climax.
beth626 chapter 20 . 8/12/2014
Grt story...just loved it
Guest chapter 20 . 7/1/2014
Love your story!
karen Whitlock Cameron Lahote chapter 5 . 2/28/2014
AM SO CONFUSED :/ LOL
Ash chapter 2 . 12/24/2013
Paul's last name is Lahote
Revelation Rebel chapter 11 . 12/2/2013
(frowns)
Does Bella have empath abilities?
Guest chapter 20 . 11/8/2013
I have given birth to two beautiful children and I can't imagine women acting like that during labor. Unless you're already a bitch, the pain of labor does not turn you into one, nor does it make you "hate" your spouse
for "doing this" to you, since we, as women, are very much involved in the "doing" part. Sorry, that's always been a peeve of mine. Nevertheless, this was a great story, thank you for sharing.
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