|Reviews for Unfathomable Beginnings|
| Guest chapter 58 . 3/11
What about the voice potion? Also, did you forget to mark it as complete or are there going to be additional epilogues? Great story.
| notwritten chapter 58 . 3/10
Nice ending. Keep smiling. :-)
| Amber Esme Hermione chapter 58 . 3/10
The only thing that is missing here is the potion bringing back Severus voice. I would've liked to see that moment when she gets it right.
| OnceUponABrokenRegal chapter 17 . 3/9
I'm loving it so far
| giggles chapter 58 . 3/9
loved this story, but the epilogue is far, FAR too short! It doesn't wrap it up, it just sounds like a taster for the next chapter!
| andemoon chapter 57 . 3/8
This story was beautiful! )
I couldn't stop smiling in this chapter!
Thank you for the story! )
I LOVE IT!
| Zigflorian chapter 57 . 3/5
That was great!
| excessivelyperky chapter 54 . 10/18/2013
Three years for attempted rape? What about the assault charges that should have been levied as well? But actually, Todd should be happy. He's much safer in Azkaban than he is where Snape...and Hermione can get to him. Can you say 'canaries'? Can you say Really Angry Birds?
At least the Wizegamot took Hermione's word, if not Snape's.
Why do they never use Veritaserum or Pensieves at trials?
| aldres02klz.org.uk chapter 56 . 8/5/2013
This is really good! Omg! I can't wait for the next chapters
| excessivelyperky chapter 53 . 4/7/2013
"If you want to get anywhere, you've got to raise the subject up with him. That's the only way you're going to know for sure.
-Ginny is absolutely right. Snape will never bring it up on his own; he went way out of his comfort zone to talk to her at all that morning.
And yes, it is right that Snape says farewell to Lily; especially the Lily that never existed except inside his broken heart.
Time to move on to a real person who will love him back.
| Melissa72 chapter 56 . 11/24/2012
Ahhh...the big "why" question:) I have the answer...b/c they don't want to lose the dream they've been holding onto of having a future together. Killing even a dream is brutal. But it's necessary if you want it in reality.
Was at first not happy with Hermione downplaying motherhood chapters and chapters ago when she thought of Ron and marriage...motherhood is the most satisfying, powerful and important vocation a woman can have...raising, molding and influencing an immortal human soul is no small task with immense reprocussions...just look at Voldemort *shivers*. But then I realized that it was b/c it was paired with Ron, who she did not truly love. For when paired with authentic love, it is only natural to want to create life and share love in real life terms i.e. little ones. Maybe it's a switch inside us...that helps us identify who we are meant to be with? I see that switch alive and on within Severus:)
Looking forward to the next chappy! And may you enjoy fresh water plimpy's to your heart's content:)
| looneylucy chapter 56 . 8/18/2012
I just read this whole thing today and I love it so far. Don't leave us hanging for too long, I can't wait to see what happens next!
| Lunaticflower chapter 56 . 8/17/2012
I tries to read slow to spent a longer time reading this lovely story but I didn't succeed. Now I have to wait but that's really hard because I like your story a lot!
Hope you update very soon :D
| Loonynamelass chapter 56 . 6/24/2012
I like your food for thought!
Also, I'm glad that ONE of them knows!
Though, regardless, Ginny's totally right about how one of them needs to make a move, regardless of whether or not they know. Risking rejectionduh! They can pretend that their situation is special but all situations are special... Maybe I'm oversimplifying, but it doesn't really matter as now Snape has NO excuse to dilly-dally.
"If Miss Weasley was correct in saying that Hermione felt the same way then there was no rush."
Not following Snape's logic there. Do rush because Hermione's all confused about this and you now have the chance to unfurrow her sexy brow! Why waste your time being less than you could be?
...Oops, missed that last section. Well, okay, thank you Snape & Hermy for rationalizing that for us. To them, I now say, Couples are still friends! I hope they find that out soon.
-A loony message from your loon,
| arynwy chapter 56 . 6/24/2012
Potions are created in the dungeons for the same reason that several types of medicines are packaged in solid white or brown bottles. Sunlight effects their potency. That's my thought.
I agree with Ginny - especially now that Severus has overheard them. They need to get on with it and Severus needs to be the one to make the move. He faced Voldie, so he can man up and do this one small thing. *smiles*