Reviews for Cape Fear
mmsolargirl chapter 30 . 1/22
Please make a sequel I really enjoyed this story!
madnessdownunder2 chapter 30 . 11/24/2014
Good work!
madnessdownunder2 chapter 14 . 11/24/2014
Oh boy!
madnessdownunder2 chapter 13 . 11/24/2014
The former seal? Sam? Please tell me Sam is not going to betray in this? Oh boy!
madnessdownunder2 chapter 12 . 11/24/2014
ala mutantx ever think about doing a cross over with them? I think Tim and Adam would get on very well (or not!)
Timlover chapter 30 . 11/19/2014
This was such an interesting story nothing at all like I expected it to be, I love the way you portrayed the NCIS characters only wish the final confrontation had been longer but not dragging it out was probably better for the kids. I'm definitely going to read more of your stories you're a great writer.
marthapreston4 chapter 3 . 11/19/2014
When you talk about learning to be human I thought you were being philospoical not having a story about superheros. I think this needs a fantasy tag not drama
Friend chapter 30 . 6/8/2014
Good story. Liked it a lot. Sequel please?!
murphy9202 chapter 30 . 5/14/2014
I just found and read this story. It is a very original story. I really liked it.
Arhie chapter 17 . 3/17/2014
Aw. I love the Cyber Crimes McGee-way, with snacks. God bless the geeks.
Arhie chapter 11 . 3/16/2014
Excellent power for Tim! Completely original, and very cool. Can't wait to read more!
Arowen13 chapter 16 . 3/6/2014
It was never really revealed what Fornell and his team
uncovered when they raided the research facility, was it?
I'll have to check tomorrow, bed time now. :)

I think it would be amusing if Gibbs finally convinces Tim
to get some sleep on an airplane, and he does fall.
That's when he first discoverers he can kinda fly.
He's been doing it before without being aware of it,
because he was phasing but not falling through the floor.
Arowen13 chapter 13 . 3/5/2014
Ah ha! I've had a thought as to what a sequel could have.
Firstly, I think that McGee's mother should have some small
part, even if it's just Gibbs creaming some sense into her.
Or where McGee contacts her to apologize about what happened
to her husband. Anyway. I had two actual plot ideas. Vance
believes that all rights will be restored, and everything is in
order for that, until evidence is unearthed that the entire 'rescue'
was planned and organized by the heroes themselves.
I don't think Hamilton was alone in planning all this.
Also, maybe not all the children they rescued were as innocent
as they thought, and maybe the girl at the end is just trying to
play him. I would give her some sort of power suppressant abilities,
she would hide, as well as more obvious ones she would admit to.
A strong force field maybe, that she can expand and contract,
that negates powers. Yet she claims she is unable to extend it very
far from herself until it becomes useful and key to make Tim's
powers temporarily gone. She could even pretend to have
lost her powers too, if the force field is invisible. Claim it was
something they were injected with if they got captured.
Also, maybe McGee gets temporarily placed with a 'neutral' (horrible)
handler for a bit while Gibbs fights to get him back, arguing against
the 'evidence' that the entire operation was set up by the heroes.
I do think there must have been more to it, because a distinct goal
was never really reviled. Wouldn't it be suspicious if Hamilton died?
Maybe it was a plan orchestrated by some old super villains,
I bet they didn't get implants and everything after the uprising.
Maybe the 'evidence' is discovered while they're on the flight
back from the island when they have their phones off and word
can't reach them, and they get grabbed on the way back.
I know! It was all a plan by someone who wanted all the superheroes
disposed of so that he would be the only one left. Or maybe a
plan by someone who wanted all the humans removed,
although I'm not sure how that would work out,
maybe to get the Heroes angry with the humans.
What about the rest of the kids who had the implants, can they
have them removed now safely?
Arowen13 chapter 7 . 3/5/2014
I wonder what powers Vance's children have?
He seems to be speaking from experience.
Arowen13 chapter 4 . 3/5/2014
I bet that if it were an emergency or if he tried,
McGee could phase into cyberspace without
access to any electronics, just as long as there
was a strong enough signal available. He could
probably do it with a weaker signal too, with
increasing amounts of risk. The first time they
try this I imagine would have some disastrous
results. Enough that everyone but Tim believes
they shouldn't try it again. I think it would send
him into a sort of shock for a few hours at least.
:P
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