Reviews for Forsaken son
BladeMaxwell-GoddessofDeath chapter 2 . 11/9/2009
That is an interesting start.

I take it Severus is his other father?

You've dome a great job.

I can't wait to read more

Kudos

Blade
domsijohn chapter 2 . 11/6/2009
lik all of your storiesi love it but why can't harry have someone that loved him for him why can't he be protected by at least one of his father happy that hs carrier pays for him but what about harry i do hope that he get's someone soon
history chapter 2 . 11/4/2009
I like a lot your story!
wandamarie chapter 2 . 11/4/2009
wow it is getting good thank you cant want to read the next chapter thanks
itachisgurl93 chapter 2 . 11/4/2009
oh...i hope u update soon! very intersting!
PrinzessTinkerbell29 chapter 2 . 11/4/2009
Hey Hun,

LOVED IT!
Rainbow2007 chapter 2 . 11/4/2009
i love it
Pigglet chapter 2 . 11/4/2009
I hope that he gets some friends soon!

love so far
Sarahamanda Klaine chapter 2 . 11/4/2009
I like this story. It is agood story. Please keep writing this story and update soon.
OnlyInDarknessCanWeSee chapter 1 . 11/4/2009
this isn't rape right? but its really good so far can't wait for more!
AnglophileJD85 chapter 2 . 11/4/2009
I loved this chapter. It is everything up.

I just had a quick question. In chapter 1 you mentioned that Harry looked like James hence his lover gave up the child because the husband was not having it.

In chapter 2, when Harry's carrier saw him he knew it was his son. You mentioned that Harry saw oddly familiar eyes.

What color are Harry's eyes (since I am assuming he has the eye color of his carrier)? You did not mention it.

Or was this a foreshadowing tool and you purposely left out the color until a later chapter?

Please update soon. I hope that Harry makes a friend or two in Slytherin. He is a pureblood afterall.

Thanks once again for doing my challenge. This story so far is fulfilling my expectations ...even though it is still early.
Lientjuhh chapter 2 . 11/4/2009
I love it.. Well done.. :)
delete-account-please 742011 chapter 2 . 11/3/2009
yeah great chapter can’t wait for more so please update again as soon as you can do so.
delete-account-please 742011 chapter 1 . 10/30/2009
yeah great chapter can’t wait for more so please update again as soon as you can do so.
Reading Nut chapter 1 . 10/30/2009
I really like your new story.
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