|Reviews for Forsaken son|
| 917brat chapter 34 . 11/29/2011
That was a seriously wonderful story one of the best ones I have read so far and I can't wait to see what you have planned next in any of your future stories...if you are planning on writting any more.
| LivingRedRose chapter 33 . 10/20/2011
I love this story. You put so much emotion into your works that I love reading them. However as I have read almost all of them I do have one recommendation, try to get a beta reader. There are a lot of simple grammar and spelling errors within the story. Also there are a few times that things get confusing with how you structured a sentence. Overall though your stories evoke a lot of emotions within and I hope you keep writing. _
| Random Reader OO1 chapter 34 . 10/8/2011
Hey, heres a challenge for you if you want, Its a cannon until the 6th book when harry finds out that Lilly and James have been alive his whole life. Sirius was rescued, and they are told that Harry was actaully the child of Severus and Lilly. Harry has defeated Voldy in the DoM, and now he must deal with being sold into marriage to either Lucius or one of the other snakes.
Hope thats enough of a challenge for you.
oh, and ps, all of your stories are awesome! you are definatly one of my fave writers!
| goodguy4u282008 chapter 34 . 8/17/2011
that was an awesome story
| MissiYoung chapter 34 . 8/16/2011
*hums to self* I hate James...*wanders off to find shotgun*
Thank for sharing this, this fic was amazing!
| Evci chapter 34 . 8/11/2011
I love it ! Its a great story !
| jspgnh1234 chapter 29 . 7/31/2011
we would like to thank you for saving papa, and to tell you to stop monking orond and have kid's!
love you siblings."
| AlbusxSeverusxox chapter 16 . 6/11/2011
This story isn't about the ups and downs of family life, this isn't about coming to terms with reality and this certainly isn't a take on pureblood culture. Instead, the entire premises of this story revolves around James being a completely out of character individual whose actions are so ridiculous that they're cringe-worthy.
| Libraria chapter 24 . 3/31/2011
Ooohhh, I've been to the Forbidden City and the Great Wall. On the Wall, me and my 24 year old brother were the only ones able to make it to the top, and I'm 13 xD
It was really tiring, though.
I do love this fic~
| Pigglet chapter 34 . 3/30/2011
I STARTED READING THIS AND STOPPED, I LOVE IT AND WANT TO GIVE A CHALLENGE, I WILL EMAIL YOU WITH IT AND I HOPE YOU HAVE FUN WRITING IT.
| raven2547 chapter 10 . 12/18/2010
i would like to inform you that 'is' is not the same as the word THIS
| sub0chick chapter 33 . 12/17/2010
very sweet story, very nicely done. all the angsty bits were handled excellently, important without being depressing and the soft fuzzy moments left you feeling happy. great job, keep up the good work and hope you have a great holiday :)
| SynescaKinetixy5593 chapter 33 . 10/27/2010
Oh. Remus appeared. Okay. But Severus is still missing...
| SynescaKinetixy5593 chapter 32 . 10/27/2010
I just realized that Snape disappeared a while back despite you having Lucius refer to him as "brother" and Draco refer to him as "uncle". I would have thought he would be in this story as much as the Malfoys. Also, Remus disappeared a little while back as well... I love this story, but I wonder what has happened to them.
| Heksie chapter 34 . 10/21/2010
nice happy ending!