Reviews for Mother
athena2517 chapter 1 . 1/29/2011
really well written and cery sad. Very touching ending
luvagoo chapter 1 . 12/9/2010
(Hi! *waves*)

This is great - I like the second half, esp. the last word being v. similar to the first :(

And what the other person said - the quote really works well in the beginning.

Really need to read that gorram book.

Anyway. I might return...later. When it's not 2 in the morning. Oops.
Surreal Squirrel chapter 1 . 8/20/2010
*sniffle* W.O.W. This is so wonderful, so pure, so honest. It's beautiful...But Ashley's not dead! SHE'S ALIVE!
Chocolate and Drama chapter 1 . 2/24/2010
Oh my goodness, this is so sweet! So lovely, so true!

But... she isn't dead! SHE CAN'T BE! SHE LIVES!
SapphireShelle91 chapter 1 . 1/26/2010
So deep and moving.

Poor Helen. You wrote her feelings so perfectly.

Great Job!
Samisim chapter 1 . 12/1/2009
Wow, that was heart-wrenchingly beautiful *sniff sniff*.
smrvn chapter 1 . 11/17/2009
this is great
rebeccavoy chapter 1 . 11/16/2009
*sob* that was beautiful. I loved the images of little Ashley in the sanctuary. And the opening lines from My Sister's Keeper (love that book!) worked so well!
Trialia chapter 1 . 11/5/2009
I like the idea. Not a drabble, though - drabbles are only 100 words, though the definition can be stretched to 200 (double-drabble) or occasionally 300. This is more of a "ficlet". :) Hope you write more.
librarymouse chapter 1 . 10/30/2009
That was good. I liked it.
chocolate chip wookiee chapter 1 . 10/29/2009
Beautiful, you made me cry...
melissaadams22 chapter 1 . 10/29/2009
Hey there,

With stories like this you feel free to jump on bandwagons...LOL

This was a very nice piece, really nice and you managed to get into Helen's head very well. Thank you, thank you, thank you.

Melissa
sandra-carter chapter 1 . 10/29/2009
good i love this... very emotional,heartbreaking, and beautifull... thank you ..
Athena2008 chapter 1 . 10/29/2009
Beautiful! Thank you for sharing it.