|Reviews for Mother|
| Caroline the Poet chapter 1 . 6/28
This is just amazing, truly amazing. I can really feel the emotions, not going to lie I teared up a bit. You did a wonderful job and I also love the part you used from My Sister's Keeper. One of my favorites to read from the Sanctuary fanfictions out there.
| athena2517 chapter 1 . 1/29/2011
really well written and cery sad. Very touching ending
| luvagoo chapter 1 . 12/9/2010
This is great - I like the second half, esp. the last word being v. similar to the first :(
And what the other person said - the quote really works well in the beginning.
Really need to read that gorram book.
Anyway. I might return...later. When it's not 2 in the morning. Oops.
| Surreal Squirrel chapter 1 . 8/20/2010
*sniffle* W.O.W. This is so wonderful, so pure, so honest. It's beautiful...But Ashley's not dead! SHE'S ALIVE!
| Chocolate and Drama chapter 1 . 2/24/2010
Oh my goodness, this is so sweet! So lovely, so true!
But... she isn't dead! SHE CAN'T BE! SHE LIVES!
| SapphireShelle91 chapter 1 . 1/26/2010
So deep and moving.
Poor Helen. You wrote her feelings so perfectly.
| Samisim chapter 1 . 12/1/2009
Wow, that was heart-wrenchingly beautiful *sniff sniff*.
| smrvn chapter 1 . 11/17/2009
this is great
| rebeccavoy chapter 1 . 11/16/2009
*sob* that was beautiful. I loved the images of little Ashley in the sanctuary. And the opening lines from My Sister's Keeper (love that book!) worked so well!
| Trialia chapter 1 . 11/5/2009
I like the idea. Not a drabble, though - drabbles are only 100 words, though the definition can be stretched to 200 (double-drabble) or occasionally 300. This is more of a "ficlet". :) Hope you write more.
| librarymouse chapter 1 . 10/30/2009
That was good. I liked it.
| chocolate chip wookiee chapter 1 . 10/29/2009
Beautiful, you made me cry...
| melissaadams22 chapter 1 . 10/29/2009
With stories like this you feel free to jump on bandwagons...LOL
This was a very nice piece, really nice and you managed to get into Helen's head very well. Thank you, thank you, thank you.
| sandra-carter chapter 1 . 10/29/2009
good i love this... very emotional,heartbreaking, and beautifull... thank you ..
| Athena2008 chapter 1 . 10/29/2009
Beautiful! Thank you for sharing it.