I'm glad Bella is starting to accept her new life. Hopefully this will be able to snap her out of that funk she is in.

Her self esteem issues are annoying. Why is she letting James get to her? She knows he is vermin and yet all of a sudden his opinion matters?

I truly loathe Renee. Whenever Bella talks to her, it makes revert into a basket case.

I just want to slap Renee, hard, and often. What is wrong with her?! She is pregnant with Phil's baby, and yet wants to hook up with Edward?! It looks like no one has ever told Renee how ridiculous and shallow she is.

I apologize for not liking this Bella. She’s immature, try’s to pretend that she’s independent but when she faces a problem she looks for help. She’s absolutely shitty to the people in her life. Rude, whiny, inconsiderate, etc.

I think i already read this but I’m not entirely sure so ima continue reading until I remember and I kinda love it so far

Great story, thank you for sharing!

This has been a perfect fic! I’m so glad I found you (through Summer Nights). I love your writing style, since I always enjoy Olderward ;) I’m still confused about the title and its meaning lol. I can ba a little dense. I really appreciated your take on Bella’s accident and recuperation. Although, thank God, I didn’t have anything near as bad as she did, I did fracture my hip last year in a freak accident and ended up having a full hip replacement. I could identify with her struggles and frustrations, doctors’ appointments and therapy sessions. But more importantly I loved how Edward took it all and helped her through it, as I have my own “Edward” who was my own personal nurse/chauffeur/chef/maid and more during those trying months. I’ll be reading your outtakes and then moving on to your next story. Thank you for sharing it with us 3

I really had a fantastic time reading this amazing story.
I just would have like to know what finally happened to the horrible Jane. How her Uncle Aro handled the problem of this insufferable person.
Anyway. I will go read the out-takes now.
Thank you for sharing your imagination with us.

Well, what do I say. I have for the longest been avoiding this story because of the age differences between Bella and Edward. But this time I was determined to actually read the whole thing. But I gotta say, the age thing was still somewhat bothering me, and I had a hard time seeing past that. When people say “age is just a number” I say “take it with a pinch of salt”, cause we are talking about a 17 year old difference with a 21 year old girl and a 38 year old man.

But overall I actually liked the story. I loved Bella’s hardass attitude. I was just hoping that Bella at some point would actually kick Jane’s ass to the curb, cause she deserved that. And I also wanted to see what happened to her after Aro found out that she wasn’t the cause of the accident.

What I have to say is that I feel that the entire story moved waaaay to fast. They met, declared they love to each other, Edward was ready to leave Hollywood, they got engaged, they decided to move to UK, they got married, the accident happened and then they adopted. Damn, that ride gave me some serious whiplash. But I’m happy that everything worked out in the end, even though I didn’t understand how Bella ever would move forward. And that was quite depressing. The accident itself brought out many emotions and gave me anxiety.

But I still want to thank you for writing and sharing this story! It gave me something to look forward to at the end of the days so I could read some.

Love,
Messy Bronze Hair

He shouldn't have told Ben he's too young but the rushing after a couple months seems appropriate. I hope Ben doesn't pillow talk with Jessica. The headline will be "Edward's in love but not with Tanya" maybe even "with his PA" if Jessica puts it together.

I thought Edward said she needed to decide because he wasn't going to hide her like his dirty little secret. That however seems to be exactly what they just decided on, Bella being his dirty little secret. Then once the secret gets out she's going to be the gold digging, home wrecking PA. I don't think they thought this through at all.

You use of”you all” is very redundant and could be changed a number of times to either you’re or all of you to be correct but the story is really good regardless.

I've read this so many times and it still give the same enjoyment. This is just one good story.

Thank you