Reviews for The Man Who Can't Be Moved
tinker03 chapter 6 . 11/26/2009
great story so far... cant wait for more
edmom chapter 6 . 11/25/2009
ahh daddy approves - loved it
BlueDiamondRing chapter 6 . 11/25/2009
This Bella is so different and quirky. I like it. Love this Edward's jaw dropping comment on the contents in her suitcase.
twilightmecrazii chapter 6 . 11/25/2009
how cute...cant wait 4 the nxt chapter
sconnolly318 chapter 6 . 11/25/2009

D*ick in a box... I love that damn skit...

Happy Turkey day!
ApplesForEve chapter 6 . 11/25/2009
love the holidays. they always leave you with the warm fuzzies.

edward and all the sexual innuendo, hot. black invasion, great tension. charlie being brought over to team edward, definite holiday warm fuzzies.

loved the update! can't wait to see how things are going to progress for edward and bella now that they're all touchy feely and lovey!
sugunary chapter 6 . 11/25/2009 great. Charlie seal of approval! Cant wait for more
pac1025 chapter 6 . 11/25/2009
love the story. can't wait to see what happens next to these two.
Spunkie09 chapter 6 . 11/25/2009
So glad Thanksgiving went well. Seems like they had fun!

Glad to see Charlie beginning to accept Edward.
gossip-bangkok chapter 6 . 11/25/2009
thanks! :)

Love it! ;)

Looking forward to more
azure0610 chapter 6 . 11/25/2009
I LOVED LOVE LOVED this chapter.

Bella is so much like me in this story. Language wise. I'd never say "dick in a box" in front of my parents though and I don't curse in front of them just out of respect and because my dad is still under the impression that I don't curse.

I really love how you changed Bella. In 3 different stories you really have 3 different Bellas. Authors ALWAYS have the same general personality for all their stories and it's annoying as fuck.

DF has sweet and innocent Bella.

SN has semi fiesty, mama Bella

TMWCBM has sailor swearing, college student Bella! Love it!
deanna127 chapter 6 . 11/25/2009
That was a cute chapter. Quite funny actually. Thanks for sharing your story!
LAN809 chapter 6 . 11/25/2009
Loved it! Glad Charlie is accepting him. It's nice that he can see that they are good together.

That sucks that someone was ripping you off. What can they possibly gain from it? I guess some people just have no respect.

Have a good Holiday!
campcathryn chapter 6 . 11/25/2009
Love it
Clynne chapter 6 . 11/25/2009
Nice surprise to see this update today.

I'm glad to see that Charlie is accepting him. Can't wait to see Renee's reaction.

I have a feeling this Tanya thing is gonna cause problems.
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