| Reviews for The Man Who Can't Be Moved |
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   LadyChery chapter 1 . 10/29/2009 I like the story, but I'm kind of freaked out by the age difference. I like young twenty something Edward |
| edmom chapter 1 . 10/29/2009 sounds great - can't wait to cont. |
| Jeraly chapter 1 . 10/29/2009 Thanks for the start of this story! |
| sugunary chapter 1 . 10/29/2009 so looking forward to this story. So far so good. does seem completely different from SN. |
| jerseyhalliwell chapter 1 . 10/29/2009 i'm already hooked :) |
| Katy dazzledbythe Cullens chapter 1 . 10/29/2009 that was awesome, you got the english slang pretty spot on. i'm from england so if you need any tips i would be hapy to help. Please update soon. |
| ipreferbrunettes chapter 1 . 10/28/2009 Great first chapter it got me hook, line and sinker! I'm intrigued by the title and age difference and can't wait to find out more. This one's definitely going on alert :-) |
| twilight-is-lovee chapter 1 . 10/28/2009 Haha, whoa. I like it. I'm just shocked that he's 17 years older than her. And I find it funny that it's 17 years, no more, no less. Well, y'know, other than the few months. But, yeah, did you do that on purpose? |
| deanna127 chapter 1 . 10/28/2009 You're brave to start another story... I like the dog, they can always majorly up the cuteness factor of a story. I like how this particular dog was the reason she quite the dog grooming place, only to be faced with him again in her new job. Very clever and funny |
| Kyuketsuki In Oki chapter 1 . 10/28/2009 OMG - The referral to Bill Engvall was priceless! I love me some redneck comedy. (I wonder how many of your readers will "get" that line?) Not for nothin: This seems ridiculously similar to another fanfic that's out there right now (that I'm crazy addicted to). It's nearing completion, I think. It's called "Help Wanted" by jaxon22 and has a nearly-identical basic premise: Bella becomes the Personal Assistant to Edward, famous movie star. There's not the age difference that your story will have, but I was just wondering if you were aware of the similarity. Now, that having been said, I am, of course, going to put this story on alert cuz I love your writing. I absolutely adored "Defying Gravity" and love BtSatM just as much, and then there's "Summer Night" - ah! |
| LAN809 chapter 1 . 10/28/2009 It looks great so far! I love that Edward is older, glad to see he is not really a womanizer and is already smitten with her. It should be interesting to see how it plays out. Looking forward to more. |
| twilightmecrazii chapter 1 . 10/28/2009 loved it cant wait 4 da next chapter |