|Reviews for Pink, White, Green and Elemental|
| Avenger 22 chapter 1 . 4/2/2010
Like about 10 other stories I read this before I had an account on fanfiction. I feel in love with it imediately! Have you written more on the M rating? If so awesome!
| saint-Ash86 chapter 1 . 1/15/2010
im finally getting a free second to read this loving it so far
| cbiggs chapter 1 . 1/13/2010
Good conversations in this story. I like the different text styles too.
| Lillywhitecherub chapter 6 . 1/10/2010
great job! as always very good chapter, it was well writen, cant wait for the baby!
| The Violet Rose chapter 6 . 1/8/2010
Aww, I liked it. We can see Garridan in there being defiant like his father! So cute! Update soon!
| Devilbunny chapter 6 . 1/8/2010
Wow! Just wow! The fight scene was graphic but so well written. I assume Validus will show up again? I also love the b5/kara interaction. I cant wait for more!
| Devilbunny chapter 5 . 12/30/2009
Ooh, the Empress is here! Its great that they announced the pregnancy but if I was Lydda, Id slap Rokk, ha. The bit with Graym asking for a bro was cute. I also like the mention of Wildfire and Dawny X3 great chappy, more plz! Exept now I have disturbing thoughts of Querl doin the funky chicken...
| Lillywhitecherub chapter 5 . 12/29/2009
Very nice chapter and shocking ending! cant wait to read more... the cuss word was unexpected, not entirerly nessisary... but the chapter was amazing as always and i can not wait to read more.
| The Violet Rose chapter 5 . 12/29/2009
Wow, nice chapter. Little Graym was so cute! My favorite line "Yuck! Girls are icky and all of their hugs and kisses! Except mommy!” I can't wait to see how the legionnaires yet again foil the Fatal Five in the next chapter! Update soon!
| Eleos Argentum chapter 4 . 12/22/2009
So, where are the reporters like Louise in those future years?
XI century reporters suck.
Good chapie. I enjoyed the history lesson.
| Devilbunny chapter 4 . 12/18/2009
I love the character interactions and of course, the romance! Well done chapter and pan202s input was good. If i was Kara, i would kill any and all reporters! Oh i cant wait till the baby comes and will lil' Graym show up? (although not Garradin in his erm current form, ha!) anyways, MORE SOON!
| Lillywhitecherub chapter 4 . 12/17/2009
Great chapter! i cant wait to hear about the dance, and the dreams Brainy are haveing are very interesting, and ad a great sense of mystery to the story. keep up the great work!
| Devilbunny chapter 3 . 12/2/2009
Gr8 chappy! The cravings were funny and its interesting how you made brin and tinya a couple in this version. I cant wait for b5s next encounter with the swamp thing, although one thing, when rokk wants to get noticed he says "amen" dont you mean "ahem"? Anyway post more soon;D
| Lillywhitecherub chapter 3 . 12/1/2009
That was a great chapter as allways. i cant wait for when the baby comes. i love this story. keep up the great work, and please update soon.
| The Violet Rose chapter 3 . 12/1/2009
Great chapter, those were some weird cravings. I've heard of strange cravings but not to those extremities. Update soon, oh the Swamp Thing is gonna be their daughter's teacher...interesting...