|Reviews for Running|
| xoxcrescentmoonxox chapter 2 . 6/15/2010
I'm so glad you updated again! And I'm sorry it's taken me so long to R&R - everyone's busy with RL, I guess. But I'm continuing to love the way you develop the characters around Holly. The scene with McGonagall was wonderful, and I think her protectiveness, almost, of the twins was very realistic.
If you keep writing and want me as your beta, I'm still willing :D Love!
| xoxcrescentmoonxox chapter 1 . 10/30/2009
Really great job! Everything you added at the beginning worked so well to set up the plot line; I love the AU world you're crafting. On a random side note, you wrote Bellatrix so well! She only has a couple lines, but her personality shines thought. Really, so do all the charcter's, even in this new situation. Loved this first chapter :-)
(I should have noticed this before, but if you're keeping it somewhat Brit-picked, Holly asks Draco where his mom is - you should just edit that to mum.)