Reviews for A Divine Spark
gaamatsu4dewin chapter 2 . 10/31/2009
wow! I wasn't expecting this! It's even better than Chapter 1! It sounds like you've met them both and are more aware of their personalities than any of us here. But that is next to impossible. If I could go backwards in time and meet anyone it would be the Chamberlain brothers. Wouldn't that be cool?
gaamatsu4dewin chapter 1 . 10/29/2009
wow! this is prolly the best work i've read from your collection. I admire your ability to make things come alive in mere words. I can see Tom clearly, Standing attention, avoiding eye contact, knowing his brother is going to chide him in some way... You should write Tom's POV. What was going through his mind?