Reviews for Goodbye I'm sorry HIATUS
Unknown chapter 7 . 5/7/2013
Hey look i was soo confused with this i have to stop reading here! It was ok to start and then it slowly got really! Umm...WIERD! But hey you did an ok job so i will give you a...

7 1/2 out of 10
C- grade
Better luck next time!
lucy chapter 12 . 4/24/2013
This story is really interesting. I cried so much while reading it and to be honest... I hated because of all the violance it and a part of me still it opend my eyes and I can't ingnore things like that any longer. You made me want to actually fight. Against sll kinds of abuse... So thank you. I even started liking the story :D
Clumzy.Person chapter 9 . 2/13/2012
good good! You need to show your timeskips better
Clumzy.Person chapter 7 . 2/12/2012
You really need to straighten some things out, Bella absolutely connot be stabbed in the stomach and live without seeing a doctor... Cullens would have caught up to her(remember 'Vampire Speed')... She cannot be raped out second and then suddenly have a make-out session with Edward... Her teachers are doing absolutely nothing because she's bullied at school to the point of death...

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Constructive critism!

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That said I'd like to volunteer as a pre-reader... A pre- reader is similar to a beta, but the different is that she doesn't make any changes to anything she just gives you thoughs and reviews on the story before you actually post it!

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Please P.M. if you have any qs/concerns/or simply wanna talk!
Clumzy.Person chapter 6 . 2/11/2012
I'm kinda confused... first I thought the Cullens were vamps then human then vamps again!

I like the storyline and I ideasbut I think you should go over this and change around some mistakes you may have made!

For example if the Cullens had the slightest indication that Bella was being hurt they would've done a lot more for her...

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Just some constructive critism, don't take it the wrong way...
darkangel0212 chapter 1 . 12/5/2011
good job on your stories
Nothin On Me chapter 7 . 12/4/2011
Look, I'm not trying to be mean or anything but your story (to me) is very confusing, and its unrealistic, how Bella gets beaten and is practicly fine in the next five seconds. If this story was a little bit more staightened out, and was a tad more realistic then a lot more people would lile it and you wouldn't get so many negative reviews. Are you Beta'd? If you ever need help, all you have to do is ask.
Love Begets Love chapter 12 . 12/4/2011
Amazing as always! Update soon!
Selene Cherie Lahote chapter 10 . 9/18/2011
You had me hooked from the start, I love how nicely everything fits together and I can't wait to find out who the actually murder is.

Can't wait for the next update.

Ashlynn Rose
sophia18 chapter 10 . 5/9/2011
Very good chapter! :P

kisses

PS: sorry for my too bad english but I am writing but not easy for me to read english
pridk chapter 2 . 5/7/2011
this story is WAY to unrealistic im sorry but i dont like it
sophia18 chapter 9 . 12/16/2010
excellent chapter! :D

kisses

PS: sorry for my too bad english but I am writing but not easy for me to read english
Guest chapter 9 . 12/7/2010
I loved the story. Are you writing more?
MrsxPattinsonx chapter 9 . 11/29/2010
Omg! This story just gets better and better ) Where's edward gone? ahh omg!P Hmmm, whos not gonna come back? I think it's prob. Esme/Bella/Carlisle. Am i right? LoL it's "Lawfully", not "lovely" XD xx
Luna Maxwell chapter 9 . 11/29/2010
this was so so so good. I love it! I want more more more! plz plz give it to me. Another chapter is like cookies to me or should i make that drugs? love it.
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