Reviews for Joes on Vacation
mmkfire chapter 12 . 12/20/2010
i loved when beachhead went and hide in the dressing room from the 25 year old. totly worth reading


have a merry chistmas
Catchandelier chapter 19 . 11/12/2010
um... i don't really hate siobahn. her behavior is deplorable, and she is a !#$% !###%& #%$&$%R% but she is still shanas sister. in my head-canon siobahn is older than shana. i'd be bitter and angry if i was one upped all my life by my baby sister, ignored for my baby sister. just sayin'.
VampireArgonian92 chapter 29 . 4/23/2010
This was a really good fic. Keep up the good work!
slapshot22 chapter 29 . 3/18/2010
Yay, bonus chapter! BeachHead knitting in front of everyone, that's pretty surprising, but it was great to see him threatening people over it. I felt really happy when he got called for mail, and got a letter from Aunt Beth. :)
slapshot22 chapter 28 . 3/18/2010
I love BeachHead's matter-of-fact review of his trip to Psyche-Out and Hawk. Priceless! I'm glad he finally had the guts to go talk to CoverGirl, Sallah will be proud, or at least not beat him up too badly. Nice way to wrap up wonderful story! :)
slapshot22 chapter 27 . 3/18/2010
This was a beautifully written chapter, and a very touching scene. It is nice to see the softer more sensitive side of BeachHead, obviously something he keeps only to his close friends.

I hope Scarlett's fries came with a free cholesterol check! I could feel my arteries hardening just reading about it! :)
Kopy Kat chapter 29 . 3/17/2010
Awesome job! This is a really sweet story. Now I have to go read some of your other stuff. One little-bitty nit picky type thing. The very last thing BeachHead says, I think 'sit-rep' means 'situation report' so saying 'report' after that is not necessary. Great job! This is one of my all time favorite stories!

Nice job! And thank you for sharing your talented writing with us.

Kopy Kat
cougartwolegs chapter 10 . 3/16/2010
Trying to imagine little Beachheads running around... Scary thought!
Kopy Kat chapter 25 . 3/16/2010
I know I've said this before but this is an awesome story! Really cute and a little sad. The end of the chapter is hilarious!

Kopy Kat
Kopy Kat chapter 24 . 3/16/2010
*Just picturing my commander's face if I told him I was leaving the Army to play ball professionally.*

Lol! I love that line!

First off, AMAZING story! Second off great job, and third off, I loved the thing at the end of the chapter about arguing over who would have to bail Beach out of jail. I noticed that last chapter you mentioned Aikido. That is very cool that you know about it. Great job!

Kopy Kat
Kopy Kat chapter 21 . 3/16/2010
one word: Awesome! this story is so cool! I love all the characterization. Great job!

Kopy Kat
cougartwolegs chapter 6 . 3/15/2010
Excellent :) I love the brother/sergeant challenge. Very nice.
TheDreamerLady chapter 2 . 3/5/2010
Wayne Sneeden!

No jokes, if I was saddled with that name, I'd refuse to share to.

Sorry. But I would.

meme12 chapter 29 . 2/17/2010
Hi there meme12 here! Sorry for not reviewing earlier. I was on MIA due to vacation. Yeah Beach finally wrote a letter! Aww...he is sweet in his letter. It is a great epilogue and I hope to read more from you in the future!

ShivaVixen chapter 29 . 2/16/2010
Hmm . . . I think you shoud do a story where it's just letters from Aunt Beth and June to Beachhead with his replies- could also add scarlet and snake eyes and call it letters from the pit or something . . . See you around!
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